Hi Sophia,

I have improved your text.

However it is still ambiguous.

Here are my improvements in CAPITAL LETTERS.

I hope this helps your success!

You wrote:

Alibaba have listed that I do this platform, it will be late?

ALIBABA HAVE LISTED THAT I AM ON THIS ITALKI PLATFORM.

AM I TOO LATE HERE ON THIS PLATFORM?
i have done foreign shoes trade for 3 years, i often ask myself, i have grown up?can i handle everything in business....

I HAVE DONE TRADE IN FOREIGN SHOES FOR 3 YEARS.

I OFTEN ASK MYSELF IF I HAVE GROWN UP?

CAN I HANDLE EVERYTHING IN BUSINESS?

if somebody do this same line,we can talk with each other for futher.

IF SOMEBODY DOES THIS SAME LINE OF BUSINESS THEN WE CAN TALK WITH EACH OTHER ABOUT BUSINESS TOGETHER.

Hope i can more professional than before,.God bless!

I HOPE I CAN BE MORE PROFESSIONAL THAN BEFORE

GOD BLESS!

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