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我叫Tom. 我是英国人。我住在上海。我喜欢看书和看电影。我的中文不好,可是所以我想改进提升我的中文水平。
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<em>Notes</em>
<em>1. Be careful of conjunctives - "My Chinese isn't good, but I want to improve." To me, the first statement doesn't necessitate, nor imply a contradictionary proceeding clause. Instead, it hints more at a relationship of causation between the two clauses, thus "所以". </em>
<em>2. “改进” is fine, but I think it's better to be a bit more specific and include "improve my Chinese level". </em>
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<em>Please keep up the good work!</em>
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我叫Tom. 我是英国人。我住在上海。我喜欢看书和看电影。我的中文不好可是(这里前后两句没有转折的关系,用“可是”这个词不恰当)我很想提高我的中文水平改进(“改进”一般是在一个具体的事物存在缺陷时使用的)。
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我叫Tom,. 我是英国人,。我现住在上海。我喜欢看书和看电影。我的中文不好可是但想改进提升。