Moja omiljeno mjesto Na moru jedan Restoran zovem se Stars. Kobarica zovem se Tony. On služa moj uvijek malo boza pivo. Moja suproga i ja volimo Stars. Tony dobiti napojnica svaka danas.

Lars Henriksson

Aug 23, 2014 10:20 AM

Corrections · 3

Moje omiljeno mjesto

[Moje because "mjesto" is neuter in gender and the possessive adjective moj, moja, moje (my, mine) has to correspond to it in gender and case.]

Na moru je jedan restoran zovem se koji se zove Stars.

[Other possible solutions: "Na moru je jedan restoran po imenu Stars." (po imenu would litterally be "by the name of" or "which goes under the name"); "Na moru ima jedan restoran koji se zove Stars." (ima means "there is".)]

[Unlike Swedish, and partially English, Croatian verbs change their form depending on the person speaking. So it's: ja se zovem (my name is, literally "I call myself..."), ti se zoveš (your name is), on/ona/ono se zove (his/her/its name is), mi se zovemo (our name is), vi se zovete (your name is), oni/one/ona se zovu (their name is). This verb may be tricky for beginners because it's reflexive, which means it uses the reflexive pronoun "se" in all the persons.]

Kobarica se zovem se Tony. Onsluža moj uvijek malo boza pivo.

[Konobarica is a waitress (female!), and konobar is male.]

[Again, you put the verb zvati se into the 3rd person singular, so it becomes se zove.]

[As for the second sentence... I really don't know what you wanted to say (?).]

Moja supruga i ja volimo Stars.

Tony dobije napojnicu svaki danas dan.

[Dobiti is the infinitive form of the word. You need to change it depending on the person - Tony is the 3rd person singular, so you put it into that form - dobije.]

[Dobiti asks for a direct object, and a direct object goes into the accusative case. That's why napojnica becomes napojnicu.]

[Danas means today, and dan means day. I think you accidentally confused those two. Since dan is of the masculine gender, svaki has to correspond to it.]

August 23, 2014

Moje a omiljeno mjesto (1)

Na moru je jedan Restoran koji se zove m se Stars.
Konobar se ica zove m se Tony. On uvijek uslužuje (2) lijepo. Daje mi a moje omiljeno, uvijek malo "boza" pivo.
Moja supruga oga i ja volimo Stars.
Tony dobija iti napojnicu a svaki a dan. as.

1. Mjesto -- neutral

2. Usluga - service

that is why we have:

Usluživati -- imperfective

Uslužiti -- perfective

Good job, keep it up.

November 20, 2016

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