would you like to know me? Hello! My name is Annie. I’m from Nantong , China, Which is a small city near Shanghai. And my hometown is famous for its seafood. My mum and dad live in the same city. And

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would you like to know me? Hello! My name is Annie. I’m from Nantong , China, Which is a small city near Shanghai. And my hometown is famous for its seafood. My mum and dad live in the same city. And I have a little sister. She is fourteen years younger than me. I live with my husband and son together. I graduated from a nursing school many years ago and worked as a nurse in the biggest hospital in our town. At the age of twenty-eight, I became the youngest headnurse in our hospital. After about thirteen-year work, I got a license of teaching through self-study, and began to teach general-technology in a high school. I’m crazy about learning English. So in my spare time, I study New Concept English I, II, III and other studying materials. Sometimes I hang out with my friends. And I like jogging and yoga. I think I do benefit a lot from regular exercise. In the future, other than doing my work well, I would continue to study English and try to polish up my English level, and I hope I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Thank you !

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Would you like to know me?

Hello! My name is Annie. I’m from Nantong, China, which is a small city near Shanghai. And my hometown is famous for its seafood. My mum and dad live in the same city. And I have a little sister. She is fourteen years younger than me. I live together with my husband and son together.
I graduated from (a) nursing school many years ago and worked as a nurse in the biggest hospital in our town. At the age of twenty-eight, I became the youngest head nurse in our hospital. After about thirteen-years of work, I got a teaching license of teaching through self-study, and began to teach general technology in a high school.
I’m crazy about learning English. So in my spare time, I study New Concept English I, II, III, and other studying materials. Sometimes I hang out with my friends. And I like jogging and yoga. I think I do benefit a lot from regular exercise.
In the future, other than doing my work well, I will continue to study English and try to polish (up) my English level, and I hope I will be able to communicate with foreigners fluently.
Thank you!