HIRO
About my travel I came to like traveling abroad in the past several years. And recently, I try it by myself. This year I had a 5 days summer vacation(13-17/8/2014). So, I visited Myanmar alone. My profile photo was taken at Bagan in Myanmar. Bagan is one of the big three Buddhist heritages and it was very beautiful place with a lot of old temples. Especially, scenery of entire Bagan from the top of the tallest temple was so magnificent and wonderful. If you have a opportunity, try to visit Bagan by all means. 私はここ数年で、海外旅行が好きになりました。 そして、最近一人旅にも挑戦しています。 今年は夏休みが8/13-17の五日間あったので、一人でミャンマーに行ってきました。 私のプロフィール写真はミャンマーのバガンで撮ったものです。 バガンは世界3大仏教遺跡の一つで、たくさんの古い寺院が残っているとても美しい場所でした。 特に一番大きな寺院の上からのバガンの風景は、とても荘厳で素晴らしかったです。 皆さんも機会があれば、ぜひバガンへ行ってみて下さい。
Aug 25, 2014 1:37 PM
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About my travel

I came to like traveling abroad in the past several years.
And recently, I've been trying it by myself.
This year I had a 5 days summer vacation(13-17/8/2014).
So, I visited Myanmar alone.
My profile photo was taken at Bagan in Myanmar.
Bagan is one of the big three Buddhist heritages and it was a very beautiful place with a lot of old temples.
Especially, the scenery of entire Bagan from the top of the tallest temple, it was so magnificent and wonderful.
If you have an opportunity, try to visit Bagan by all means.


私はここ数年で、海外旅行が好きになりました。
そして、最近一人旅にも挑戦しています。
今年は夏休みが8/13-17の五日間あったので、一人でミャンマーに行ってきました。
私のプロフィール写真はミャンマーのバガンで撮ったものです。
バガンは世界3大仏教遺跡の一つで、たくさんの古い寺院が残っているとても美しい場所でした。
特に一番大きな寺院の上からのバガンの風景は、とても荘厳で素晴らしかったです。
皆さんも機会があれば、ぜひバガンへ行ってみて下さい。

April 6, 2015

About my travel

I came to like traveling abroad in the past several years.
And recently, I have tried it by myself.
This year I had a 5 day summer vacation(<a href="tel:13-17/8/2014">13-17/8/2014</a>).
So, I visited Myanmar alone.
My profile photo was taken at Bagan in Myanmar.
Bagan is one of the big three Buddhist heritages and it was very beautiful place with a lot of old temples.
Especially, the scenery of the entire Bagan from the top of the tallest temple was so magnificent and wonderful. (I think this will flow better: "Especially the scenery of the whole of Bagan seen from the top of the tallest temple; it was so magnificent and wonderful.)

If you have an opportunity, try to visit Bagan by all means.

 

Good luck!! :) がんばって!


私はここ数年で、海外旅行が好きになりました。
そして、最近一人旅にも挑戦しています。
今年は夏休みが8/13-17の五日間あったので、一人でミャンマーに行ってきました。
私のプロフィール写真はミャンマーのバガンで撮ったものです。
バガンは世界3大仏教遺跡の一つで、たくさんの古い寺院が残っているとても美しい場所でした。
特に一番大きな寺院の上からのバガンの風景は、とても荘厳で素晴らしかったです。
皆さんも機会があれば、ぜひバガンへ行ってみて下さい。

September 1, 2014

I came to like traveling abroad over the past several years. <em>Otherwise technically correct but I'd say something like "I began to like travelling abroad over the last few years.</em>

And recently, I tried it by myself.
This year I had a 5 day summer vacation(13-17/8/2014).
So, I visited Myanmar alone.
My profile photo was taken at Bagan in Myanmar.
Bagan is one of the big three Buddhist heritages and it was very beautiful place with a lot of old temples.
Especially, the scenery of the entire Bagan from the top of the tallest temple was so magnificent and wonderful.
If you have a opportunity, try to visit Bagan by all means. 

August 25, 2014

I am not sure but your second sentence should be written in present perfect tense. Good luck.

August 25, 2014
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