Mahsa
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I want to go (If you possible, correct my mistakes. thank you so much) Here, there are a lot of problems about Religion, govern, Culture, Job, Opinion's free, Wearing of women, Rules, Right for women and.... Here, talents are wasted. Educations is too weak. Science is mixed with religion so can not be help full some times. People are intrusive. I see some mothers cause addiction their sons with spoiling. Some mothers annoy their daughters. I see bad behaviors men with their women. I see to be beaten children by the parents. I like developed country. I like advance. I accepted right s of the human. I want healthy life.I want to get education in PHD in my major.I like to work in my major. I like modern living and well- being. I like to eat healthy food. I like watching beautiful things, shopping, listening musics with walking, swimming, dancing, listing lectures of psychology and homeopathy. So I will to go a developed country for my goals. If you can, correct my mistakes. thank you so much.
Aug 27, 2014 7:31 AM
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I want to go (If you possible, correct my mistakes. thank you so much)

Here, there are a lot of problems about religion, government, culture, jobs, free expression of opinion, wearing of hijab by women, rules and rights for women, etc.
Here, talents are wasted. Educations is too weak. Science is mixed with religion so it can not be helpful some times. People are intrusive. I see some mothers cause addiction in their sons with spoiling. Some mothers annoy their daughters. I see bad behaviors from men with their women. I see children beaten by their parents.
I like developed and advanced countries. I accepted human rights. I want a healthy life. I want to get a PHD in my major. I would like to work in my major field. I like modern living and well-being. I like to eat healthy food. I like watching beautiful things, shopping, listening to musics while walking, swimming, dancing, listening lectures in psychology and homeopathy. So I will to go a developed country to achieve my goals.
If you can, correct my mistakes. thank you so much.

August 28, 2014
Please do not talk to me Elina. Good luck.
August 31, 2014
Here, we have a lot of people who are unemployment while they graduated from university, we have a lot of talents that were wasted. we have a lot of people who are intrusive while they think are good people. Please look at our addicted people, look at dirty streets , homeless children ect.
August 31, 2014
I told my opinion and you do not right tell to me I told lies. You stay here and to be good luck. You are a person of here who are intrusive and dictator Elena.
August 31, 2014
such an ugly entry! where ever u go, u have to have an identity! people without identity are empty! we do have a lot of good things here, i do believe not only u have exaggerated but also you did write lies about here.
August 30, 2014
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