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Workout on Boardwalks I ran and walked on this oceanfront boardwalks which surrounded by beautiful nature after sunrise. My shoes were too fashionable with hidden wedge for a moderate-intensity workout. However, it made me sweat a lot and turned out to be ok. A prankster splashed water in my back and I tried to do the same thing with my coconut water in return for it. I thought that was sort of tropical shower and it would be fun.
Aug 29, 2014 8:15 PM
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Workout on Boardwalks

I ran and walked on this the oceanfront boardwalks which after sunrise, surrounded by beautiful nature after sunrise. My shoes were too fashionable with a hidden wedge designed for a moderate-intensity workout. However, it they made me sweat a lot and turned out to be ok.

A prankster splashed water on my back and I tried to do the same thing in return with my coconut water in return for it. I thought that it was a sort of tropical shower and it would be fun.

September 6, 2014

Workout on Boardwalks

I ran and walked on this oceanfront boardwalks which surrounded by beautiful nature after sunrise. My shoes were too fashionable with hidden wedge for a moderate-intensity workout. However, it made me sweat a lot and turned out to be ok. A prankster splashed water in my back and I tried to do the same thing with my coconut water in return for it. I thought that was sort of tropical shower and it would be fun.

After sunrise I ran and walked on an ocean front boardwalk which was surrounded by the beauty of nature. My fashionable shoes with a hidden wedge were not appropriate for a moderate intensity workout. However, it did make me sweat a lot and it turned out to be okay. A prankster splashed water on my back and in return I tried to do the same to him using my coconut water. I thought it was like a tropical shower and would be fun.

I rearranged your words to be more like a conversation.

September 6, 2014
Does it have lots of mistakes? I would greatly appreciate your help.
August 29, 2014
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