Mario
Internet at different ages Internet is the best way to get information about anything. Nowadays is essential in our society, due to the possibility of communicating with anyone anytime and anywhere. Firstly, internet is good at all ages, because it has websites, entretainments and places for everyone, as videogames, social networks, newspaper... Furthermore, today the kids learn very fast and in a little time they are able to use new tecnologies, including internet very well, so the age which kids start to use internet is each and each more soon. On the contrary, internet can be dangerous for kids and young people because they must have enough experience on internet to avoid perjudicial websites or to be cheated for any person. Therefore, the most important is to know your way around on internet. Moreover, old people can have some difficulties to handle new tecnologies, because they have never used nothing similar and it's hard to them. In conclusion, internet can be used by anyone and we should utilise internet, since it will be better to us, in spite of the fact that we must take care of any websites.
Aug 29, 2014 9:32 PM
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The Internet at different ages

The Internet is the best way to get information about anything. Nowadays it is essential in our society, because of the possibility of communicating with anyone, anytime and anywhere.

Firstly, the internet is good for all ages, because it has websites, entertainments and places for everyone, such as videogames, social networks, newspapers...

Furthermore, today the kids learn very fast and in very little time they are able to use new tecnologies, including the internet, very well, so the age at which kids start to use internet is earlier and earlier every day.

On the other hand, the internet can be dangerous for kids and young people because they need to have enough experience on internet to avoid websites promoting prejudice or to avoid being cheated by someone.  Therefore, the most important thing is to know your way around on internet.

Moreover, old people can have some difficulty handling new tecnologies, because they have never used anything similar and it's hard for them.

In conclusion, the internet can be used by anyone and we should use it, since it will be good for us, even though we must be very careful with websites.

 

Nice English!  Some of my suggestions are not necessary, but I think they have a more idiomatic style.

August 29, 2014
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