Morgane
School! Hi ! In 4 days I am going to go in an High School. I think it will be great. Last year was so easy and then so annoying. I've had a very good mention. I expect better this year. But I decided to go in another town for many reasons. First I want to meet many new people. I already knew all the persons in the other Highschool of my town... and I don't want to be with them. Second my bachelor was not in the other High School. Third, the town is more larger than mine. So there are more sights, malls, coffee shops, tea shops etc. Whereas in my town there aren't many coffee or shops. It's a simple little town. But even if all things seem to be good there is just one little problem. All days I'll have to take the bus. So it means that I'll have to wake up myself earlier. Then, be at the bus-stop at 6:45am. Ah la la.." But you must know what you want. " I hope everything will be okay. Thank to have read. If some sentences are not right, tell me.
Aug 29, 2014 9:46 PM
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School!

Hi !

In 4 days, I am going to go to high school. I think it will be great. Last year was so easy and then so annoying. I've had a very good mention? [I got very good grades?]. I expect better this year.
But I decided to go in another town for many reasons.
First, I want to meet many new people. I already know everyone in the other high school in my town... and I don't want to be with them.
Second, my bachelor was not in the other High School?  <em>Not sure what you mean.</em> [The other high school does not offer the subjects I want to study]?
Third, that town is more larger than mine. There are more sights, malls, coffee shops, tea shops etc whereas, in my town, there aren't many coffee shops. It's a simple little town.
But even if everything looks good, there is just one little problem. Every day, I'll have to take the bus. So it means that I'll have to wake up myself earlier. Then, I'll have to be at the bus stop at 6:45am. Ah la la.." But you must know what you want. "
I hope everything will be okay.
Well done!  Check my punctuation corrections too. Michael 
Thank to have read.
If some sentences are not right, tell me.

August 29, 2014
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