为什么我要学习中文

大家好，我是米格尔，十八岁了，来自菲律宾。我很喜欢和中国人一起玩刀塔。这个游戏很有意思，我玩了它很多年了。虽然我是来自菲律宾人，我很想要跟中国人玩刀塔，他们是游戏强敵因为中国人很可爱，哈哈 谢谢大家啊啦.

Not too bad at all.  However, here are some notes you need to be aware of.  

1.   When you say 中国人 to mean the race, then it is better to use 华人.  中国人 can mean those from Mainland Chinese, unless you really mean that way.

2.  中国人很可爱 Chinese are cute/cutesy can be taken to mean something disparaging, like some pet or animal.  If you are referring to the sex, then it becomes even worse.  So I changed it to "Chinese are strong game opponents". 

为什么我要学习中文

大家好，我是米格尔，十八岁了，来自菲律宾。我很喜欢和中国人一起玩刀塔。这个游戏很有意思，我已经玩它了很多年了。虽然我来自菲律宾，但是我要跟中国人玩刀塔，因为中国人很可爱，哈哈 谢谢大家啊哦

1. I don't qutie understand - "Even though I come from the Phillippines, I want to play DOTA with Chinese people, because Chinese people are cute" - what is the causation between your native country and wanting to play with Chinese people? And the relationship between being "cute" and wanting to play with Chinese natives?