Give compliments Give comments I saw a short film the other day and I found it very touching. A young man like to see people smile, so he always gives people compliments and people enjoy these compli

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Give compliments Give comments I saw a short film the other day and I found it very touching. A young man like to see people smile, so he always gives people compliments and people enjoy these compliments a lot. It seems that there is no one he can’t make smile. But one day, he met a girl and falls in love at the first sight. He almost does everything to make her smile, but failed. He is very depressed and miserable. However, one day he finds her smiling! That’s really a surprise! What on earth happens to her? Leave some suspense to you. Please watch the film on person to reveal the secret. It’s like a advertisement, isn’t it? This film is amazing. I really enjoy it. The film delivers information that every people likes to be praised. Compliments have great influence on people. When people are in favorable circumstances, commending them can increase their motivation and even work or study harder. When people are stressful, commending them can give them confidence and courage. They will recover very soon and be full of energy. Even if you are going to criticize someone, you should praise him first and then point out his fault and give out your suggestion. If so, he will be willing and glad to accept you criticism and suggestion. As for me, I like compliments. If I get some, I will be more passionate with my work and perform better to get more compliments. So we should give people compliments as many as possible and it is important to look for the best in people.

Aug 30, 2014 2:27 PM

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Give compliments

Give comments
I saw a short film the other day and I found it very touching. A young man liked [1] to see people smile, so he always gives gave people compliments and people enjoyed these compliments a lot. It seems seemed that there is no one he can’t make smile. But one day, he met a girl and falls fell in love at the first sight. He almost does almost everything to make her smile, but failed. He is was very depressed and miserable. However, one day he finds her smiling! That’s really a surprise! What on earth happens happened to her? Leave I will leave some suspense to for you. Please watch the film on in person to reveal learn the secret. It’s This is [2] like an advertisement, isn’t it?
This film is amazing. I really enjoy it. The film delivers information suggests that every all people likes to be praised. Compliments have great influence on people. When people are in favorable circumstances, commending them can increase their motivation and to even work or study even harder. When people are stressful stressed, commending them can give them confidence and courage. They will recover very soon and be full of energy. Even if you are going to criticize someone, you should praise him first and then point out his fault and give out your suggestion. If so, he will be willing and glad to accept your criticism and suggestion.
As for me, I like compliments. If I get some, I will be more passionate with my work and perform better to get more compliments. So we should give people compliments as many often as possible and it is important to look for the best in people.

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[1] A story is usually told using the past tense. If you are describing a story that was told in a movie you have watched, you must use the past tense.

[2] Here, the pronoun "it" is ambiguous. Do you mean the film is like an advertisement? Or your Notebook entry is like an advertisement? Because you mean your Notebook entry is like an advertisement, I changed the pronoun to "this".

Please do not worry about the number of corrections I have made. Your English is truly very good. While I have made a lot of corrections, many are concerned with using past tense when telling a story. Please ask me if you are unsure about any of the other corrections.

August 30, 2014