Tina
something about fashion (in my opinion) I used to be a student who wear loose clothes and think fashion is not an important thing for people’s life, because I always believe that when only people have inner achievement, can they further their life and career. But now, my opinion become different ---- the life could be changed by a beautiful appearance to some extent. I watched a movie called ”The Devil wears Prada” a year ago, the actress of this screen adaptation is Anne Hathaway as Andrea Sachs, a university graduate who goes to New York City and receives a job as a co-assistant to powerful fashion magazine editor Miranda Priestly. At first, Andy is a person who totally has not fashion-conscious, with the help of her colleague, she gradually learns her responsibilities and begins to dress more stylishly to show her effort. But Andy’s friends blame her for losing herself to become beautiful. In my opinion, Andy definitely didn't do anything wrong. Because I think other people will respect you for your tidy appearance, at the same time, being a beautiful person will become more confident and more charming, no one want to see someone unkempt and untidy. After watching that movie, I tried to pay more attention to my dress sense. Based on fashion magazine, there is a wide range of choices available in clothing, footwear and accessories, I prefer choose to wear can reflect my interest or personality. In free time, I usually focus on my favourite brands, such as SLY or Moussy, two famous Japanese brands, which have causal and sweet style. I often wear short T-shirt collocate with flared Jeans or skirts, coordinating pattern and colours to show my style in summer; wearing short jean jacket or coat with boots in winter. I also use some accessories to prettify myself, such as headdress or necklace. Besides, I generally learn about makeup and begin use some cosmetics are recommended in fashion magazines, such as lipsticks, perfumes and eyebrow pencils etc. I thought I would never used these thing if I still was a student who graduated from high school, but now, I manage to make me looks better. There are some people try to emphasized that improving self-cultivation is more important than spending much time on fashion, but I still believe everyone hope their appearance looks beautiful and smart, I am willing to dress me up pretty and graceful even if I stay in the library. Paying attention to fashion could make people look better and improve their taste of trends, Why not?
Sep 1, 2014 1:47 AM
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Hi. I think when we talk about appearances and how to present oneself, the proper word is 'style' not 'fashion'.
September 1, 2014

There are some people who try to emphasized that improving self-cultivation is more important than spending much time on fashion, but I still believe everyone hopes their appearance looks beautiful and smart,. I am willing to dress me up pretty and graceful even if I stay in the library. Paying attention to fashion could make people look better and improve their taste of trends, so Wwhy not?

 

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[1] "People" do not have a life, as such. Each person has a life.
[2] Use only two dashes (--) to represent an 'em' dash (—).
[3] If "Andy" is the nickname of Andrea, it should be introduced as her nickname. (Otherwise the reader will wonder, "Who is Andy?")
[4] Unless 'sweet' is a special word used for fashion, I think this adjective may be wrong.

September 1, 2014

sSomething about fashion (in my opinion)

I used to be a student who would wear loose clothes and think that fashion is not an important thing for people’s a person's life [1], because I always believe that when only when people have a person has inner achievement, can they further their life and career. But now, my opinion has become different ---- [2] the life could can be changed by a beautiful appearance, at least to some extent.

I watched a movie called ”The Devil wears Prada” a year ago,. tThe actress of this screen adaptation is Anne Hathaway as Andrea Sachs, a university graduate who goes to New York City and receives a job as a co-assistant to a powerful fashion magazine editor, Miranda Priestly. At first, Andy [3] is a person who totally has is not fashion-conscious but, with the help of her colleague, she gradually learns her responsibilities and begins to dress more stylishly to show her effort. But Andy’s friends blame her for losing herself to become beautiful. In my opinion, Andy definitely didn't do anything wrong. Because I think other people will respect you for your tidy appearance, at the same time, being a beautiful person will become more confident and more charming, no one wants to see someone unkempt and untidy.

After watching that movie, I tried to pay more attention to my dress sense. Based on fashion magazines, there is a wide range of choices available in clothing, footwear and accessories,. I prefer choose to wear clothes that can reflect my interest or personality. In my free time, I usually focus on my favourite brands, such as SLY or Moussy, two famous Japanese brands, which have a causal and sweet [4] style. I often wear a short T-shirt collocate with flared Jjeans or skirts, coordinating patterns and colours to show my style in summer; wearing high-waisted jeans and a short jacket or coat with boots in winter. I also use some accessories to prettify myself make myself pretty, such as a headdress or necklace. Besides, I generally learn about makeup and begin to use some cosmetics which are recommended in fashion magazines, such as lipsticks, perfumes and eyebrow pencils, etc. I thought I would never used these things if I still was a student who graduated from high school, but now, I manage to make me looks myself look better.

 

September 1, 2014
that is high-waisted jeans and short jacket ;D I'm sorry
September 1, 2014
heart of beauty in everyone, We are more willing to get close to beautiful people。
September 1, 2014
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