Jocelyn
Day book. Lastbweek, I didn't concentrate English study. It is simply an excuse but, I gonna start my daybook. Today, I met my friend in my universary. Many things were changed. New stores open and there are many people. I spent good time with my friends. One of my friend is going to Singapore two weeks later,so it was a farewell. She had studied trade during last month and go to Singapore as an internship. During stay shool, I felt a little sad because I graduated, so I am not a student anymore. I can't take a class and enjoy campus life. Anyway, time flied.I didn't want to part with friends.
Sep 1, 2014 9:57 AM
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Day Book.

Lastb week, I didn't concentrate on my English study. It is simply an excuse but, I am going to gonna start my daybook.

Today, I met my friend in my at universary. Many things have  were changed. New stores have opened and there are many people.

I spent a good time with my friends. One of my friends is going to Singapore in two weeks time later,so it was a farewell.

She had studied trade during last month and is going to Singapore as an internship.
my stay at school, I felt a little sad because I've graduated, so I am not a student anymore. I can't take a class and enjoy campus life.

Anyway, time flew flied.I didn't want to part with friends.

September 1, 2014

Day Book.

Last week, I didn't concentrate in my English study. It is simply not an excuse but, I am going to start my daybook.

Today, I met my friend in my university. Many things had changed. New stores were open and there were many more people.

I had a good time with my friends. One of my friend is going to Singapore in two weeks, so it was a farewell.

She studied trade last month and is going to Singapore due to an internship.

During the visit, I felt a little sad because I have graduated, so am not a student anymore. I can't take any classes or enjoy campus life.

Anyway, time flied and I didn't want to part with friends.

 

I really like your extract that you have written. Although there were a few mistakes with different tenses, all in all it was a fantastic piece filled with challenging words and phrases that you got right. Keep up the good work!! - <em>F.Doe</em> 

September 1, 2014
Thanks alot~;)
September 2, 2014
Suggestion: I didn't study a lot of English last week, but I don't really have an excuse. Today I went to meet some friends at university.When I was there I realised that many things had been changed and I remember that it didn't look like it does now the last time I went. I had a great time with my friend. One of my friends is going to Singapore in a couple of weeks so I wished her farewell. She studied trade last semester as is going to Singapore to get an internship. Whilst I was at school I felt a little sad because I'm no longer a student; I've graduated and I'm now all grown up! I can no longer enjoy the campus life.
September 1, 2014
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