My som Last year I gave birth to my lovely son.I found taking care of a baby is so hard.And be a full-time mother is also very torturing.I hope my baby can be healthy.He got a high fever a few days ag

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My som Last year I gave birth to my lovely son.I found taking care of a baby is so hard.And be a full-time mother is also very torturing.I hope my baby can be healthy.He got a high fever a few days ago,these days I feel very sad.Fortunately，he has recovered now.I love you so much my darling baby.

Sep 1, 2014 1:53 PM

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My som Son

Last year I gave birth to my lovely son. I found taking care of a baby is so hard. And be being a full-time mother is also very torturing. I hope my baby can will be healthy. He got a high fever a few days ago, and these days I feel felt very sad. Fortunately, he has recovered now. I love you so much, my darling baby.

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Your writing is very good, well done. Be sure to add a space (" ") after every comma (",") and every full stop (".").

I am pleased that your son is now feeling better.

September 1, 2014

My Son

Last year, I gave birth to my lovely son. I find taking care of a baby so hard. And being a full-time mother is also very torturing. I hope my baby will be healthy. He came down with a high fever a few days ago; these days I feel very sad. Fortunately, he has recovered now. I love you so much my darling baby.

September 30, 2014

I admire you as a mother, it is certainly a hard job. Babies do get sick, I remember my son being ill most of the time between 6 months and one year old, but now he is a fit and healthy man!

November 2, 2014

My son

Last year I gave birth to my lovely son.I found taking care of a baby is so hard.And be a full-time mother is also very torturing.I hope my baby can be healthy.He got a high fever a few days ago,these days I feel very sad.Fortunately，he has recovered now.I love you so much my darling baby.

September 2, 2014

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