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Things to See and Do in This Island Does my notebook entry have lots of mistakes? I would greatly appreciate your help. There are so many things to do in Maui. We chose to visit the Iao valley state park. After that, we went to Ho'okipa Beach Park in Paia which is known as world famous for windsurfing. We enjoyed breathtaking mountain landscapes. I personally loved an isolated little grass shack in Iao park and a bunch of birds resting on the oceanfront in Paia. It was peaceful but the funny thing just popped up in my mind. -The End -
Sep 2, 2014 2:16 AM
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Things to See and Do in on This Island

Does my notebook entry have lots of mistakes? I would greatly appreciate your help.

There are so many things to do in Maui. We chose to visit the Iao Valley State Park. After that, we went to Ho'okipa Beach Park in Paia which is known as world famous for windsurfing. We enjoyed breathtaking mountain landscapes. I personally loved an isolated little grass shack in Iao park and a bunch of birds resting on the oceanfront in Paia. It was peaceful, but the a funny thing just popped up in my mind.
-The End -

In the last sentence you would not want to use the, instead of a, because it implies that there was a specific thought which was funny, but you did not tell us what it was and there was no way for us to figure it out on our own. Using the word a tells us that you had a thought, but it does not have to be explained.

September 2, 2014
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