Could you correct my English? I went back Japan in the middle of August for my wedding ceremony. My wife and I went to city office to submit our marriage document at the end of last year, so we are al

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Could you correct my English? I went back Japan in the middle of August for my wedding ceremony. My wife and I went to city office to submit our marriage document at the end of last year, so we are already married in law. But we hadn't held our wedding party yet. That was a very good party. I spent precious time surrounded by my dear friends. Friends in high school, university, company, many people warmly celebrated us. I appreciate attending the party though they were busy. It was difficult to prepare it because we lived in Japan and Rome separately, but I was glad to hold the party. I will never forget the time we spent with our friends.

Sep 2, 2014 4:47 PM

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Could you correct my English?

I went back to Japan in the middle of August for my wedding ceremony. My wife and I went to the city office to submit our marriage document at the end of last year, so we are already married in by law. But we hadn't held our wedding party yet.
That was a very good party. I spent precious time surrounded by my dear friends. Friends in from high school, university, and work company, many people warmly celebrated with us. I appreciate enjoyed attending the party though they we were busy. It was difficult to prepare for it because we lived in Japan and Rome separately, but I was glad to hold the party. I will never forget the time we spent with our friends.

September 2, 2014

Could you correct my English?

I went back Japan in the middle of August for my wedding ceremony. At the end of last year, my wife and I went to city hall to office to submit apply for our marriage certificate document at the end of last year, and so we are already legally married in law. [or you can say, "In the eyes of the law, we are man/husband and wife" but we hadn't held did not have our wedding party yet. [Thus, socially, we are not "officially" married in the eyes of our friends and family] This added part is just to make your essay more interesting.

That was a very good Anyway, the wedding party was great. I spent Our precious time moments were surrounded by my many dear friends; Friends in from high school, from university, from our work places and from all walks of our lives that we were lucky to have met and became friends. company, many people warmly celebrated us. I We are very touched and appreciated attending the party though they were busy, they made the time to come to wish us well. It was difficult to prepare it because The party planning was difficult since I live in Rome and at that time, she was living we lived in Japan and Rome. separately, but I was glad to hold the party. I will never forget the time we spent with our friends All these difficulties are nothing compared to the time when we spent an unforgetable time together with our dear dear friends.