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How can I grow up I was born in Urumchi in 1991.My parents are both from this city. I studied violin when I was 5 years old.I stopped playing violin beacause it's too difficult for me.I studied art in high school.I come to college in 2009.My major is fashion design.I graduated in 2013.After I graduated I went to Yunnan travel for 2 month.After this travel I started work in Shanghai.Now I'm a designer.I love my job love my life.
Sep 3, 2014 3:50 AM
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How can I grew up

I was born in Urumchi in 1991.My parents are both from this city. I studied playing the violin when I was 5 years old.I stopped playing the violin beacause  because it's too difficult for me.I studied art in high school.I come went to college in 2009.My major is fashion design.I graduated in 2013.After I graduated I went to Yunnan to  travel for 2 months. After this travel I started work in Shanghai.Now I'm a designer.I love my job love my life.

Well done , hope this helps ,  Ian - English teacher / China .

Instead of , went to college , could also say , I attended college in 2009 .

September 3, 2014
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