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My holidays in Scotland This summer I was in Scotland for one week. My aunt, her Scotish husband and me visited his family in Aberdeen. I really like the city. It is very nice and the beach is cool, even when it is cold. One day we drove the "West Coast Trail" up to Inverness and then around the Loch Ness. The most time it was raining cats and dogs but at the some rain-free moments we took amazing photos of the landscape. Anouther day we were in Stonehaven an beautiful little town at the coast. Nearby was a lovely castly called Dunnottar Castle with a typical Scotish bagpiper. In my time in Scotland I met a lot of new people and I really love this country but I would never like to live there because it is too cold. :)
Sep 14, 2014 5:43 PM
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My holidays in Scotland or "My Scottish Holidays"

 

This summer I was in Scotland for one week. My aunt, her Scottish husband and me visited his family in Aberdeen. I really like the city. It is very nice and the beach is very beautiful cool, [very puzzling at the first glance when used as a slang because of what the rest comes after. If you must use it, then use "cool-looking".  "It" is ambiguous.  Do you mean the water, the weather that is cold? ] even when its waters are is cold.


One day We also drove to the "West Coast Trail", up to Inverness and then around the Loch Ness. The Most of the time it was raining cats and dogs but at there were also some rain-free moments when we were able to take took amazing photos of the landscape.


Anouther On another day, we were in Stonehaven; an beautiful little town at by the coast. There was the nearby was a lovely castly called Dunnottar Castle complete with a your typical Scottish bagpiper.
In my time in Scotland I met a lot of new many people while I was in Scotland. and I really love this country but I would never like to live there because it is much/way too cold. :)

September 14, 2014
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My holidays in Scotland

This summer I was in Scotland for a week. My aunt, her Scotish husband and I visited his family in Aberdeen. I really liked the city. It was very nice and the beach was cool (mild?), even when it's cold.
One day we drove the "West Coast Trail" up to Inverness and then around the Loch Ness lake. Most of the time it was raining cats and dogs, but during the rain-free moments we took amazing photos of the landscape.
On another day we were in Stonehaven; a beautiful little town at the coast. Nearby was a lovely castle called Dunnottar Castle complete with its own Scotish bagpiper (bagpipe player?).
During my time in Scotland I met a lot of new people and I really love this country. But I could never live there because it is too cold. :)

 

just some small corrections. Overall you did very well.  I hope you could take a moment to look at my German piece that I wrote today and make any corrections.

regards

Richard

September 15, 2014
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