Tonia
is it wrong to judge people on their physical appareance....? I consider this fact a lack or respect and sensitivity, especially the education. I also think it as something very ugly. The physical appareance is not chosen by us,I mean we don`t choose the eyes colours or the shape of the face, OR a perfect body, among other physical aspects, we neither don`t choose the place of birth or the country, that is something given by genes or nature. I don`t stand people has jokes or laughs who is physically ugly, in fact I don`t usually accept them , I also interrupt this kind of conversations and I start to discuss. In short I mean ,these things should be educated in families and continue in the schools and in public places, and as with all new technologies. Could someone correct me this text; please?
Sep 15, 2014 9:21 AM
Corrections · 9

appearance             a-p-p-e-a-r-a-n-c-e


to appear -  aparecer


But!:   apparently  - aparentemente



September 15, 2014

is Is it wrong to judge people on their physical appareance....?

I consider this fact to refelct reflect a lack or respect and sensitivity, and especially the of education. I also think of it as something very ugly. The p Physical appareance is not chosen by us, By that I mean we don`t choose the eyes colours or the shape of the face, OR a perfect body, among other physical aspects, we neither Neither don`t we choose the place of birth or the country, that is something Those are given by genes or nature.

I don`t can't stand people has who jokes about or laughs at people who is are physically ugly, in In fact I don`t usually accept them , and I also interrupt this kind these kinds of conversations and I start to discuss. I think you mean to say here that you discuss why you will not discuss it with them?
In short I mean extra space ,these things should be educated taught in families and that should be continued continue in the schools and in public places, and as with all new technologies.

Could someone correct me this text; please?

 

Mark's correction was excellent Tonia, but since we are friends I thought I would give you another vesion because that's nice to have sometimes. One thing I want to make sure you are aware of though "educado" means something totally different in English than in Spanish. You might want to research that word in particular if you aren't clear on the difference. You used it well, but just in case I thought I'd mention it. :D 

September 15, 2014

is it wrong to judge people on their physical appareance....?

I consider this fact as having a lack of respect, and sensitivity, and especially the education. I also think of it as something very ugly. The Our physical appareance is not chosen by us, I mean we don`t choose the colour of our eyes colours or the shape of the our face, OR whether we have a perfect body, among other physical aspects, nor do we neither don`t choose the place of our birth or the country, that is something given to us by our genes or nature.

I don`t stand for people who make has jokes or laughs at those who is are physically ugly, in fact I don`t usually accept them , I also interrupt this kind of conversations and I start to discuss it with them.
In short I mean , these things should be educated taught in families and continue in the schools and in public places, and as with all new technologies.

Could someone correct me this text; please?

September 15, 2014

is it wrong to judge people by/based on their physical appearance ...?

I consider this fact such judgement/prejudice to show a lack of respect and sensitivity, and especially a lack of <em>(just repeat the phrase in this case to clarify and stress)</em> the education. I also think of it as something very ugly. The Our physical appearance is not chosen by us, I mean we don`t choose the eye colour or the shape of the face, OR a perfect body, among other physical aspects; nor do we neither don`t choose the place of our birth or the our country, that is something given these things are determined by genes or nature.

I don`t can't/won't stand people has who make jokes, or laugh at those who is are physically ugly; in fact I usually don`t usually accept totally reject them. I also interrupt this kind of conversation and I start to discuss change the topic/subject.
In short, I mean, proper attitudes in these things should be educated taught in the family, and continued in the schools and in society public places, just in the same way we teach and as with all new technologies.

Could someone correct me this text; please?

September 15, 2014
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