NOTHING TO CELBRATE Like always are independece day came with rain. My Family and I, we had plans for this important day, but unfortunallety are plans can be finish, bacause the bad da

Veronica

NOTHING TO CELBRATE Like always are independece day came with rain. My Family and I, we had plans for this important day, but unfortunallety are plans can be finish, bacause the bad day. My sisters and I, we separate some recepies to made are typic food, like "Flautas" "gorditas", Enchiladas" "ceviche", because the rain and difficult tecnics my old sister can´t been driving to my mom´s house, because her car doesn´t work, and take a taxi or bus its very difficult to get on raining day, ...and she´s pregnet so, we can´t let her out to her home. So my little sister, my mom and I we join us, to eat. but with any special dish. only a little of soup and that it. I hope this raining days its get over soon.

Sep 17, 2014 3:56 PM

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NOTHING TO CELBRATE

Like As always, are Independece Day came with rain.

My Family and I, we had plans for this important day, but unfortunately are our plans can be finish were cancelled, bacause of the bad day.

My sisters and I, we used favourite/traditional recipes to prepare separate some recepies to made are typical food, like "Flautas" "gorditas", Enchiladas" "ceviche". Because of the rain and technical difficulties tecnics my oldest sister can´t been drive to my mom´s house because her car doesn´t work, and taking a taxi or bus its is very difficult to get on a rainy day. And she´s pregnant so, we can´t let take her out to of her home.

So my little sister, my mom and I we join us came together, to eat. but without any special dish. only a little of soup and that's it.

I hope the rainy days its get will be over soon.

September 17, 2014

thanks Jimmy!! I feel a little bit rush and appreciate your comments, thanks for you help.

September 17, 2014

Mm.. no soy muy bueno en eso de las correcciones lo que si te puedo decir es el uso del "our" en lugar de "are" por ejemplo en: "but unfortunallety are plans can be finish" sería mas bien "but unfortunallety our plans can be finish" , también en "we separate some recepies to made are typic food" sería: "we separate some recepies to made our typic food"

September 17, 2014

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