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My time! Everyday, I have to do many things. Private time , Work time , Collect knowledge time , Hobby time , Friends time , Family time , Special time and italki time. hahaha for italki time. i'm free for 2 hours from 4 PM - 6 PM of Thailand. if you would like to be a partner to improve languages. come on! I will be a good partner. but I can speak english not well. Thank you.
Sep 18, 2014 3:49 AM
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My time!

Everyday, I have to do many things.

Private time , Wwork time , collect knowledge study time , Hhobby time , Ffriends time , Ffamily time , Sspecial time and italki time. [1, 2] hahaha

fFor italki time. ,  iI'm free for 2 hours from 4 PM - 6 PM of Thailand.

iIf you would like to be a partner to improve languages. ,  come on! I will be a good partner.
bBut I can not speak eEnglish not well.

Thank you.

 

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[1] No space before a comma, and one space after the comma.

[2] The word after a comma is not capitalized, unless it is a word that must always be capitalized.

 

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Your writing is very friendly, and your spelling is very good.  Well done!  When you find a language partner, ask if he or she can help you with punctuation.  If you improve your punctuation, this would greatly improve your written English.

September 18, 2014
There is also rest time :)
September 18, 2014
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