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我的工作 我的工作。我是老师。但是我不教孩子。我教大人。我教英语和电脑软件。我在大学学习了电脑。但是我不想当程序员。所以我教电脑。我在公司教。 我的课平时花很少的时间、三天,二天,一天。所以我每星期认识新的学生,不一样的学生。我认识很多人。老人,年轻的人,钱的人,无业的人,经理,医生,设计师。我常常在外国的公司教课。所以我的学生常常是外国人-德国人,意大利人,美国人,俄罗斯人,法国人。 我去很多的公司,很多城市,很多地方。很有意思。 当然有的学生很难。有的时候电脑软件很难。 但是我喜欢我的工作。 (我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?) My work. I’m a teacher. But I don’t teach children in schools. I teach adults. I teach English and IT. I studied Computing. But I don’t want to work as a programmer. So I teach computing. I teach in companies. My courses usually last a very short time- 1 day, 2days, 3 days. So every week I have new students, different students. I meet a lot of people. Old people, Young people, rich people, unemployed, managers, doctors, designers, etc.I often work in foreign companies so I meet a lot of different nationalities- Germans, Italians, Americans, Russians, French. I go to a lot of companies, a lot of towns, a lot of places. It is very interesting. Of course some students are difficult, and some computer programs are difficult. But I like my job.
Sep 18, 2014 5:57 AM
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我的工作

我是一名老师。但是我不教孩子。我教大人。我教英语和计算机。我在大学学习了计算机。但是我不想当程序员。所以我在公司教计算机。
我的课平时花费很少的时间、三天,二天,一天。所以我每星期认识很多各位各样的新的学生。我认识很多人,老人,年轻人,有钱人,无业游民,经理,医生,设计师等等。我常常在外国的公司教课。所以我的学生大多是外国人-德国人,意大利人,美国人,俄罗斯人,法国人。 我去过很多公司,很多城市,很多地方。很有意思。
当然有的学生很难教。有的时候电脑软件很难。
但是我喜欢我的工作。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

My work. I’m a teacher. But I don’t teach children in schools. I teach adults. I teach English and IT. I studied Computing. But I don’t want to work as a programmer. So I teach computing. I teach in companies.
My courses usually last a very short time- 1 day, 2days, 3 days. So every week I have new students, different students. I meet a lot of people. Old people, Young people, rich people, unemployed, managers, doctors, designers, etc.I often work in foreign companies so I meet a lot of different nationalities- Germans, Italians, Americans, Russians, French. I go to a lot of companies, a lot of towns, a lot of places. It is very interesting.
Of course some students are difficult, and some computer programs are difficult.
But I like my job.

 

一般  电脑  用在日常交际的口语中,  不是非常正式

比如,我有一台电脑 I have a computer 

计算机  用在专业性较强的地方,比较正式

比如,我的专业是计算机 my major is computer 

 

另外,我的专业是网络工程(=^・ェ・^=) if i have some problems ,can I ask you for help ?

September 18, 2014
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我的工作

我的工作是一名老师。但我不教孩子,我教成人。我教的科目是英语和电脑软件。我在大学学习了电脑,但我不想当程序员。所以我教电脑,并且我在公司教。
我的课平时花很少的时间,三天,二天,一天。所以我每星期认识新的学生,不一样的学生。我认识很多人。老人,年轻的人,钱的人,无业的人,经理,医生,设计师。我常常在外国的公司教课。所以我的学生常常是外国人:德国人,意大利人,美国人,俄罗斯人,法国人。 我去很多的公司,很多城市,很多地方。很有意思。
当然有的学生很难。有的时候电脑软件很难。
但是我喜欢我的工作。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

My work. I’m a teacher. But I don’t teach children in schools. I teach adults. I teach English and IT. I studied Computing. But I don’t want to work as a programmer. So I teach computing. I teach in companies.
My courses usually last a very short time- 1 day, 2days, 3 days. So every week I have new students, different students. I meet a lot of people. Old people, Young people, rich people, unemployed, managers, doctors, designers, etc.I often work in foreign companies so I meet a lot of different nationalities- Germans, Italians, Americans, Russians, French. I go to a lot of companies, a lot of towns, a lot of places. It is very interesting.
Of course some students are difficult, and some computer programs are difficult.
But I like my job.

September 18, 2014
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我的工作

我是一名教师。但是我不在学校课堂教孩子。我教人。我主要英语和电脑软件。我在大学学习了电脑软件。但是我不想当程序员。所以我在各个公司教电脑我在公司教。 

通常我的课程很短平时花很少的时间:三天,二天,甚至还有一天。所以我每星期都会认识新的学生,不一样的学生。我认识很多人老人,年轻人,人,人,经理,医生,设计师等等。我常常在外国的公司教课。所以我的学生常常大部分是外国人-德国人,意大利人,美国人,俄罗斯人,法国人。 我去很多的公司,很多城市,很多地方。很有意思。
当然有的学生很难。有的时候电脑软件很难。
但是我喜欢我的工作。

加油)))

September 18, 2014

我的工作

“/“means the sentences before and after the symbol are both correct.

What is inside the brackets "()" meants that adding it or not won't affect the meaning.

 

我的工作。我是老师。但是我不教孩子。我是老师,但是我不在学校教孩子/但是我不教孩子。It is better to use a common between them, because these two sentences are logically connected.

我教大人。/我教成年人Both are correct. But 成年人 is more written language.

我教英语和电脑软件。/我教英语和信息技术。IT-information technology is directly translated into 信息技术. But it sounds very formal. Or you could say我教英语和计算机. Here 计算机 dosen't mean computer but a subject of computer technology.

我在大学学习了电脑计算机。I am afraid 电脑 can refer to a subject.

但是我不想当程序员。所以我教电脑计算机。我在公司教。
我的课平时花很少的时间、三天,二天,一天。我的课平时花的时间很少——三天、两天或者一天。Sounds more natural. You can use “——” the dash here, functioning almost the same as the English dash "-". But notice that it writes differently.

所以我每星期认识新的学生,不一样的学生/不同的学生

我认识很多人。老人,年轻的人,钱的人,无业的人,经理,医生,设计师。

Old people, Young people, rich people, unemployed, managers, doctors, designers, etc.

老人、年轻人、富人、失业者、经理(人)、医生、设计师等等。等等means etc.

我常常在外国公司教课所以我的学生常常是外国人——德国人,意大利人,美国人,俄罗斯人,法国人。 我去很多公司,很多城市,很多地方。很有意思。You can either say 我去过/了很多公司(past tense),or 我会去很多公司(present tense and future tense). However, 我去很多公司 sounds strange to my ears.
当然有的学生很难。I can't understand this sentence. Do you mean some students are difficult to deal with? 有的学生很难教

有的时候电脑软件很难(学)。 

但是我喜欢我的工作。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?) 

My work. I’m a teacher. But I don’t teach children in schools. I teach adults. I teach English and IT. I studied Computing. But I don’t want to work as a programmer. So I teach computing. I teach in companies. 

My courses usually last a very short time- 1 day, 2days, 3 days. So every week I have new students, different students. I meet a lot of people. Old people, Young people, rich people, unemployed, managers, doctors, designers, etc.I often work in foreign companies so I meet a lot of different nationalities- Germans, Italians, Americans, Russians, French. I go to a lot of companies, a lot of towns, a lot of places. It is very interesting.
Of course some students are difficult, and some computer programs are difficult.
But I like my job.

 

 

It is fantastic that you love your job. Not many people can say so. I feel that your writing is progressing. Almost no big gramatical errors. You have deal with the word order very well. One thing for notice, try to use more comma between sentences when necessary instead of the full stop.

September 27, 2014

我的工作

我的工作。我是老师。但是我不教孩子。我教大人。我教英语和电脑软件。我在大学学习了电脑。但是我不想当程序员。所以我教电脑。我在公司教。
我的课平时花很少的时间、三天,二天,一天。所以我每星期认识新的学生,不一样的学生。我认识很多人。老人,年轻的人,钱的人,无业的人,经理,医生,设计师。我常常在外国的公司教课。所以我的学生常常是外国人-德国人,意大利人,美国人,俄罗斯人,法国人。 我去很多的公司,很多城市,很多地方。很有意思。
当然有的学生很难。有的时候电脑软件很难。
但是我喜欢我的工作。

(我自知中文水準淺薄, 若不練習何能精進?)

My work. I’m a teacher. But I don’t teach children in schools. I teach adults. I teach English and IT.

我的工作是一名老师。但我教的学生不是孩子,而是大人。我教英语和电脑软件。

I studied Computing. But I don’t want to work as a programmer. So I teach computing. I teach in companies.

我所学专业是计算机,但我不想当程序员,所以我在公司里教计算机。
My courses usually last a very short time- 1 day, 2days, 3 days. So every week I have new students, different students.

通常我的课时很短-一天、两天、三天这样。所以每星期我都有新的,不同的学生。

I meet a lot of people. Old people, Young people, rich people, unemployed, managers, doctors, designers, etc.

我认识很多人,他们中有老人、年轻人、富人、穷人、经理、医生、设计师等等。

I often work in foreign companies so I meet a lot of different nationalities- Germans, Italians, Americans, Russians, French.

我经常在国外工作,因此我认识很多不同国籍的学生-有德国人、意大利人、美国人、俄罗斯人、法国人。

I go to a lot of companies, a lot of towns, a lot of places. It is very interesting.

我去过很多公司,很多城市,很多地方。这非常有意思。
Of course some students are difficult, and some computer programs are difficult.
But I like my job.

当然有些学生很难教,有些计算机程序也很难。但是我喜欢我的工作。

September 21, 2014
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