Lily
Finding last year, I graduated from my college. at first i thought it would be very easier to find a job .I got almost all the relvent certificate during my study and also the bachelor degree.....One year has past , I understand so many of life. life is so hard for me. I realized love is fragile , it can t be texted by time and distance. My world outlook, outlook on life and values have been overturned totally.Job is the most important thing in my next life. Being reality,maybe right maybe wrong,each half. I have no passion, no hope, even i forgot my first dream. How can i become like this . It must not be me , it's someone else who has stolen my soul . I am finding myself now ..........
Sep 19, 2014 3:34 AM
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Finding

Last year, I graduated from my college. At first I thought it would be very easy easier to find a job. I got almost all the relevent certificates during my studies and also the a Bachelor Degree.....One year has past passed, I understand so many much of life. Life is so hard for me.
I realized love is fragile , it can t be texted measured by time and distance. My world outlook, outlook on life and values have been overturned totally. A job is will be the most important thing in my next life.
Being In reality, maybe Perhaps I'm right, maybe  perhaps I'm wrong, each half. I have no passion, no hope, I even i forgot my first dream. How did I  can i become like this? . It must cannot be me, it's someone else who has stolen my soul . I am finding myself now ..........

September 24, 2014

Finding

Last year, I graduated from my college. At first I thought it would be very easy to find a job. I got almost all the relvent certificates during my study and also the bachelor degree..... One year has past, I understand so much of life. Life is so hard for me.
I realized love is fragile , it can t be tested by time and distance. My world outlook, outlook on life, and values have been overturned totally. Job is the next most important thing in my next life.
Being real, I maybe half right, or half wrong. I have no passion, no hope, even I forgot my first dream. How can have I become like this. It must not be me, it's someone else who has stolen my soul . I am finding myself now ..........

 

Overall you did good. I am not sure if I understood 100% what you mean't in your "I maybe right maybe wrong, ..." sentence, so my correction there may not be the best.

September 24, 2014
加油!我觉得有的时候每个人想一样。 Just keep trying and everything will eventually work itself out.
September 24, 2014
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