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Need Some Help - Grammar/ Usage Mistakes - An Giang: Tourist Attraction An Giang (Vietnam) Has Awaked Its Tourist Potentials - Part I 1. An Giang with its Goddess rituals in the fourth lunar month at Mt. Sam has attracted millions of visitors to Chau Doc every year. 2. In the whole country, there has never been another locality that can receive such a huge crowd during a period of about 5 months. 3. However, to draw tourists, create such interest appealing enough for tourists to come back many a time. An Giang then doesn't have enough material and artistic bases to do such a thing. 4. Indeed, over 20 years have passed since liberation day, An Giang has got the so-called tourist branch, but investment deserving its importance is still aloof. 5. Its nature, scenic landscape, vestiges have not been attractive enough to tourists while infrastructures are still not fully made, services are non-existent. 6. And so, An Giang is likely to begin with everything in exploiting, developing this industry nowadays. 7. Things to be done are ahead, out of our reach. 8. But in 1995, at least two projects have been investigated, designed and appealing for invested capital. Those are Mt. Sam (Chau Doc) and Pho Que Islet (Long Xuyen) ones.
Sep 21, 2014 9:57 AM
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An Giang (Vietnam) Awakes Its Tourist Potentials - Part I 


1. An Giang with its Goddess rituals in the fourth lunar month at Mt. Sam attracted millions of visitors to Chau Doc every year.

2. In the whole country, there has never been another locality that received such a huge crowd during a period of about 5 months.

3. However, to draw tourists, the creation of such interest appealed tourists to come back again and again. An Giang then doesn't have enough material and artistic bases to do such a thing.

4. Indeed, over 20 years had passed since liberation day, An Giang got the so-called tourist branch, but investment deserving its importance is still aloof.

5. Its nature, scenic landscape, vestiges have not been attractive enough to tourists while infrastructures are still not fully made, services are non-existent.

6. And so, An Giang is likely to begin with everything in exploiting, developing this industry nowadays.

7. There are things needed to be done.

8. But in 1995, at least two projects have been investigated, designed and appealing for invested capital. Those are Mt. Sam (Chau Doc) and Pho Que Islet (Long Xuyen) ones.

September 21, 2014
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