Hope - Italian Girl
Could you correct this text, please? Thank you so much! Hello everyone. I'm talking about me. I'm an Italian girl. I believes in love and all that is pure. I also believe in all that is beautiful, refined and elegant. I am a creative person but I hate superficiality. I think there is something to learn in everyone. I'm here to learn/improve my English, but I could also learn something deeper, through some beautiful conversations that there will be, I hope. See you and... thanks in advance! (<--- is correct to say "thanks in advance"?)
Sep 21, 2014 1:12 PM
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Could you correct this text, please? Thank you so much!

 

Hello everyone. I'm talking about myselfme. I'm an Italian girl. I believes in love and all that is pure. I also believe in all that is beautiful, refined and elegant. I am a creative person but I hate superficiality. I think there is something to learn in from everyone. I'm here to learn and improve my English, but I could but also learn something deeper. That is, through some beautiful meaningful conversations that there will be coming soon. , I hope. Be more positive :) See you and... Thanks in advance! (<--- is correct to say "thanks in advance"?) Yup!

September 21, 2014
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Could you correct this text, please? Thank you so much!

Hello everyone. I'm talking about me. I'm an Italian girl. I believes in love and all that is pure. I also believe in all that is beautiful, refined and elegant. I am a creative person but I hate superficiality. I think there is something to learn in everyone. I'm here to learn/improve my English, but I could also learn something deeper, through some beautiful future conversations, that there will be, I hope. See you and... thanks in advance! (<--- is it correct to say
"thanks in advance"?) Yes, it is.

September 21, 2014
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Could you correct this text, please? Thank you so much!

Hello everyone. I'm talking about me. I'm an Italian girl. I believes in love and in all that is pure. I also believe in all that is beautiful, refined and elegant. I am a creative person but I hate superficiality. I think there is something to learn in everyone. I'm here to learn/improve my English, but I could also learn something deeper, through some beautiful conversations that there will be, I hope. See you and... thanks in advance! (<--- is correct to say
"thanks in advance"?) (Yes it is!)

September 21, 2014
Thank you very much Louis! Do you study Italian language? May we chat and help each other? Have a nice day! :-)
September 23, 2014
Well done, and very nice sentiments! Complimenti!
September 23, 2014
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