Chenyang
Losting Many Things This morning, I get a notification that my cell phone could update to iOS 8. I wanted to try the new system, then I chose to update. It took long time, and the updating still not finished. I thought there might something wrong, then I clicked to power off, then restarted to it again, but I found a plug and iTunes, the picture showed it all the time, I realized I failed to update, but I could not get it back. I searched the problem in the internet, some people said the cell phone had to connect to the iTunes in the computer, then I downloaded the system in the iTunes again, I even felt a little nervous, I was afraid I could not power it on. After finishing the downloading, I saw my cell phone was recovering, I got very happy, but I found except the contacts I lost most things, like all apps I had and all the pictures. I don't know how to recover them because I never backup. Even though it keeps my contacts, I feel a little bit sad. I should pay much more attention during the updating work.
Sep 21, 2014 2:26 PM
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Losting Many Things As noted in your comment :)


This morning, I get received a notification that my cell phone could can be updated to iOS 8. I wanted to try the new system, then and so I chose went ahead to update. It took long time, and the update still not finished. I thought there might be something gone wrong, then I clicked to and rebooted it. power off, then restarted to it again, but Then I found a plug??? and iTunes. the picture showed it which was being displayed all the time. I realized I failed to the update had failed and unable to restore to its former state, but I could not get it back. I searched the problem on the internet.  Some people said that the cell phone had to be connected to the iTunes on the computer. then I redownloaded the system in the iTunes again, I even felt and was feeling a little nervous. I was afraid that I could not power it on. After finishing the downloading was complete, I saw that my cell phone was returning to its normal self and recovering, I got was getting very happy. but However, I found except for the contacts,  I had lost most of my other stuff things, like my  all apps and I had and all the pictures. I don't know how to recover them because I never did backed them up. Even though it keeps my contacts are still intact, I felt a little bit sad. I should pay much more attention during updates! the updating work.

September 21, 2014
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Losting Many Things

This morning, I got a notification that my cell phone could update to iOS 8. I wanted to try the new system, then so I chose to update. It took a long time, and the updating is still not finished. I thought there might something wrong, then so I clicked to power off, then restarted to it the phone again, but I found saw a plug and iTunes, (the picture showed it all the time). I realized I it failed to update, but I could not get it back. (I got lost with what you were trying to say in the last few sentences). I searched for the problem in the internet and some people said the cell phone had to connect to the iTunes in the computer,. Then I downloaded the system in the iTunes again, I even felt a little nervous. I was afraid I could not power it on. After finishing the downloading, I saw my cell phone was recovering, I got was very happy, but I found except the for my contacts I lost most things, like all apps I had and all the pictures. I don't know how to recover them because I never backup. Even though it kept my contacts, I feel a little bit sad. I should pay much more attention during the updates work.

 

(Good job!  Try to make more sentenses that are shorter because the ones you have here are very long and get a little confusing.)

September 21, 2014
The title should be "Losing Many Things"
September 21, 2014
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