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My activity today I am studying english for some years. But I never did it seriously. I can read well. If someone speak very slowly, I can understand. But in common situations, I can't to do very much. For instance, I write in english. But it's hard to me. To speak? The words disappear. So, some days ago, I decided to study in a serious way. I downloaded an aplication, Anki. Anki is very useful. It is about flashcards. I bought a ebook, Fluent Forever. I am using its method to improve my vocabulary. It was few days ago, but I feel my vocabulary is better now. Quickly. And today I thought it is a good ideia to write some text every day. I'm not sure I will can do it every day. But I will try.
Sep 23, 2014 10:10 PM
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My Activity Today [This sounds very straight laced and too formal a title for this sort of essays.  "What I did Today" would be better]

 

I am have been studying English for some years now. But but I never did it seriously. I can read well. and if someone speaks very slowly, I can understand. But However, in other common situations, like writing, I can't to don't very well much. For instance, I write in english. But It's hard to me. And when I start talking with someone, To speak? The words started to disappear left and right.

So, some A few days ago, I decided to study in a English seriously way. I downloaded an aplication called Anki. Anki It is very useful. It is about flashcards. I bought an ebook called "Fluent Forever". I am using its method to improve my vocabulary. It This was only a few days ago, but and already I feel that my vocabulary has improved quickly is better now. Quickly.

And Today I thought that it is a good ideia to write something each day text every day. I'm not sure if I will can do it every day. but I will try.

 

Except for minor grammar mistakes here and there, on the whole, not bad at all.  My correction is to make your piece more natural sounding.  Remember, if it cannot be understood, no one can correct it.  So you know you are doing well!

September 24, 2014
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My activity today

I am studying english for some years. But I never did it seriously. I can read well. If someone speaks very slowly, I can understand. But in common situations, I can't do very much. For instance, I write in english. But it's hard to me to speak. When I try to speak, the words disappear.

So, some days ago, I decided to study in a serious way. I downloaded an aplication, Anki. Anki is very useful. It is about flashcards. I bought a ebook, Fluent Forever. I am using its method to improve my vocabulary. It was few days ago, but I feel my vocabulary is better now. Quickly.

And today I thought it is a good idea to write some text every day. I'm not sure if I will be able to do it every day, but I will try it.

September 23, 2014
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My activity today

I am have been studying English for some years. But I never did it seriously. I can read well. If someone speaks very slowly, I can understand. But in common situations, I can't to do very much. For instance, I write in English. But it's hard to for me. To speak? The words disappear.

So, some days ago, I decided to study in a serious way. I downloaded an aplication, Anki. Anki is very useful. It is about flashcards. I bought an ebook, Fluent Forever. I am using its method to improve my vocabulary. It was few days ago, but I feel my vocabulary is better now. Quickly.

And today I thought it is would be** a good ideia to write some text every day. I'm not sure I will can do it every day. But I will try.


 **you could also use was. "is" sounds wrong there.

September 23, 2014
I'm sure you will get to improve your english faster than you expect! :) I think you speak english very well.
September 23, 2014
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