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I knew a girl on the Internet Recently, I knew a girl on the Internet. Because of I had some English’s questions, I published the message on the QQ group. And then, one girl replied me on the same group quickly. After a few days, she sent voice messages to me on QQ. When i heard that voice, oh my God, that’s a kind, gentle and soft voice! More importantly, it sounds like one girl’s voice that I met many years ago. The girl who I knew many years ago, is a kind, very talented. Her name is Jing. And I didn’t see her for one and a half year. In this time, I have no any messages from her. Jing graduated Sun yat-sen university Chinese department. She likes Chinese ancient poetry, and she can write that type of poetry. I do love listening to her to read aloud the modern prose and classical pomes. Her voice is so gentle and soft, and full of charm, it can make you forget something. So, when I first heard that very similar voice form that net girl, my heart almost jumped out! I thought that net girl was Jing! And then, I insisted to ask that net girl’s name, finally, I knew they are two different girls. The net girl’s name’s Yan. She was born in Guangzhou of Guangdong province, and now she works at Srilankan Airline Limited Guangzhou Representative Office. She is good at English. She likes to travel. She has been to many countries in the world, and gave me the deepest impression is the pictures from her to the Turkey. Turkey’s geological belongs to karst landform, the beautiful natural scenery is fascinating. Oh, she has ever told me many times that she saw the most stars in Turkey in her life. Yan likes to watch stars, and likes to go hiking, and likes to thinking. What a lovely girl! 最近我在网上认识一个女孩子。 由于我有一些英语问题,我就在QQ群里发布了信息。很快,群里的一个女孩回复了我。几天后,她通过QQ发送语音信息给我。当我听到那把声音时,噢,天啊,那是一把和蔼的,温柔的声音!更重要的是,她那把声音很像我多前年认识的一个女孩。 我多年前认识的那个女孩,是一个善良且相当有才华的女子。她的名字叫静,我有一年半没见她了,且在这期间我没有她的任何消息。 静毕业于中山大学中文系,喜欢中国古诗词,并且她也会写那种体裁的诗词。我喜欢听她朗读现代散文和古典诗词,她的声音是那么地温柔,充满着魅力。听她朗读能让你忘记一些事情。所以,当我第一次听到来自那网络女孩的,和静非常相似的声音时,我的心都快要跳出来了!我以为那网络女孩是静! 然后,我坚持询问那个网络女孩的名字,最后,我知道他们是不同的两个人。 网络女孩的名字叫燕,她出生在广东广州,现在在斯里兰卡航空广州代表处上班。她的英语很棒。她喜欢旅行,她已经去过
Sep 28, 2014 4:13 AM
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I knew met a girl on the Internet

Recently, I knew met a girl on the Internet.
Because of I had some English’s questions, I published the  a message on the QQ group. And then, one girl replied me on the same group quickly. After a few days, she sent voice messages to me on QQ. When i I heard that voice, oh my God, that’s it was a kind, gentle and soft voice! More importantly, it sounds like the voice of one a girl’s voice that I met many years ago.
The girl who I knew met many years ago, is a kind, and very talented. Her name is Jing. And I didn’t see haven't seen her for one and a half years1*. In this time, I haven't no any messages from her.
Jing graduated Sun yat-sen university Chinese department. She likes Chinese ancient poetry, and she can write that type of poetry. I do love listening to her to read aloud the modern prose and classical poemes. Her voice is so gentle and soft, and full of charm, it can make you forget something about everything. So, when I first heard that very similar voice form that net girl, my heart almost jumped out! I thought that net girl was Jing!
And then, I insisted on  to ask asking that net girl’s name, finally, I knew found out they are two different girls.
The net girl’s name’s is Yan. She was born in Guangzhou of Guangdong province, and now she works at Srilankan Airline Limited Guangzhou Representative Office. She is good at English. She likes to travel. She has been to many countries in around the world, and what gave me the deepest impression is were  the pictures from of her to in the Turkey. Turkey’s geological geology belongs to karst landform, the beautiful natural scenery is fascinating. Oh, she has ever  even told me many times that she saw the most stars in Turkey in her life.
Yan likes to watch stars, and likes to go hiking, and likes to thinking. What a lovely girl!

最近我在网上认识一个女孩子。
由于我有一些英语问题,我就在QQ群里发布了信息。很快,群里的一个女孩回复了我。几天后,她通过QQ发送语音信息给我。当我听到那把声音时,噢,天啊,那是一把和蔼的,温柔的声音!更重要的是,她那把声音很像我多前年认识的一个女孩。
我多年前认识的那个女孩,是一个善良且相当有才华的女子。她的名字叫静,我有一年半没见她了,且在这期间我没有她的任何消息。
静毕业于中山大学中文系,喜欢中国古诗词,并且她也会写那种体裁的诗词。我喜欢听她朗读现代散文和古典诗词,她的声音是那么地温柔,充满着魅力。听她朗读能让你忘记一些事情。所以,当我第一次听到来自那网络女孩的,和静非常相似的声音时,我的心都快要跳出来了!我以为那网络女孩是静!
然后,我坚持询问那个网络女孩的名字,最后,我知道他们是不同的两个人。
网络女孩的名字叫燕,她出生在广东广州,现在在斯里兰卡航空广州代表处上班。她的英语很棒。她喜欢旅行,她已经去过

1* more usual - a year and a half.

 

Some errors but lot of nice expressions. You communicate feeling and warmth which is not always easy.

October 1, 2014
世界上的许多国家了,而给我印象最深刻的是她去土耳其旅行拍的照片。土耳其的地质属于喀斯特地貌,那种自然的风景相当迷人。噢,她还数次告诉我,她这辈子看到的星星最多的地方是在土耳其。 燕喜欢看星星,喜欢徒步,喜欢发呆。多么可爱的女孩啊。
September 28, 2014
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