Cybill
my dream i'm 17years old.i have a dream.i want to travel around the would.i want to study different kinds of lauanages.in fact.i had seen many people speak english fluencily.for example.my old brother can translate french artcile .i had admired he.and. i think it's unnessary to do the same thing like others i want to speak this fluencily lauanage as like them.and i think i will realize my dream as soon as i do my best. i wish i will successed in the furture. i think i liked the Witch .i will realize my dream.come on.
Sep 30, 2014 2:55 PM
Corrections · 2

Just a few remarks on the previous correction:

-  lauanages --> languages

-  For example, my older brother... --> Another example of people knowing a different language is my older brother, who can translate French articles.

- I had admired him. --> "I admire him. " or "I've always admired him." since the action is still continuing.

-  I think it's unnessary -->  I think it's unnecessary

- I want to speak this language fluently as they do --> I want to speak English as fluently as they do

- in the furture. --> in the future.

September 30, 2014

My Dream

I'm 17 years old, and  I have a dream. I want to travel around the world. I want to study different kinds of lauanages. In fact, I have had heard seen many people speak English fluently cily. For example, my older brother can translate French articles  artcile .I had admired him. and. I think it's unnessary to do the same thing as  like others, I want to speak this language fluently as they do  fluencily lauanage as like them.and I think I will realize my dream as soon as I do my best. i wish i I hope I will succeed successed in the furture.
I think I am like a liked the Witch .I will realize my dream. Come on.

September 30, 2014
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