Francisco
A letter to my penfriend John John is doing a project about how people in different parts of the world spend their holidays. He asks me for telling him where people from my country usually go and what they do. He also ask me for what I am doing (I'm supposed to enjoy my holidays). Dear John! Hi! How's everything going? It´s nice to hear from you. I'm glad to help you with your project, which seems to be really interesting. Well, I'm going to start talking about where people in my country usually go and how the spent their time there. The are likely to travel to the beach and lying on there. Their favourites places are Ibiza, Mallorca, Valencia, Alicante and Malaga. However, there ara also people who don't like the warm temperatures in summer and travel to the mountais to do outdoor activities such as camping, hikking or biking. In my case, I often have my holidays in Almería. I really like the beach but I hate crowded places such as I've said. In Almería not only I can lying on the beach, I can also do snorkeling because the sea water is pretty clean. I hope this information can help you in your project. Please, let me know as soon as possible what happens about it. Best wishes. xxxxxxxx xxxxxx
Oct 1, 2014 3:11 PM
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A letter to my penfriend John

John is doing a project about how people in different parts of the world spend their holidays. He asks me for telling to tell him where people from my country usually go and what they do. He also ask me for what I am doing (I'm supposed to enjoy my holidays).

Dear John!

Hi! How's everything going? It´s nice to hear from you. I'm glad to help you with your project, which seems to be really interesting.

Well, I'm going to start talking about with where people in my country usually go and how the spent their time there. The are likely to travel to the beach and lying on lie there. Their favourites places are Ibiza, Mallorca, Valencia, Alicante and Malaga. However, there ara also people who don't like the warm temperatures in summer and travel to the mountains to do outdoor activities, such as camping, hikking or biking.

In my case, I often have take my holidays in Almería. I really like the beach but I hate crowded places such as I've said. In Almería not only I can lying lie on the beach, I can also do snorkeling because the sea water is pretty clean.

I hope this information can help you in with your project. Please, let me know as soon as possible what happens about with it.

Best wishes.

xxxxxxxx xxxxxx

 

Great entry, Francisco! You have very few errors and express yourself very well :)

October 1, 2014
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