What an Unexpectedsad Day
I am so sad that I think my I cannot cry.tears would be flown. But I'm grown grew up as much so I can handle this much pain.
My boss said announced that he would be cutting 30 % from the wages of all employees. I was so shocked and I thought it is eunfair. If he planned to do this should cut wages he should have given us a month's notice.told us one mothe before. I decided to resign.leave my work. I really like my job and work really hard and I am very satisfied with everything even though the payment is sometimes delayed. I must have should beeen so happy because I start a of starting long holidays from tomorrow. BUT But now I am,,,,not happy ...at all. I will try to keep calm mind control and have a great time anyway though.
What an unexpected sad day!
I am so sad and I think my tears have flown. But I've grown up this much and I can endure this pain.
My boss said he would cut 30% of wages for all employees. I was so shocked and I thought it was unfair. If he decided to cut wages he should have told us one month before. I decided to leave my job. I really like my job and have worked really hard. I am very satisfied with everything even though the pay is sometimes delayed. I must have beeen too happy to realize because of the start of vacation as of tomorrow. But not anymore as of today. I will try to manage my feelings and have a great time.
What an unexpectedly sad day
I am so sad that I think I'm going to cry. But I'm grown up so I think I can handle this much pain.
My boss said he would be cutting the employees wages by 30%. I was so shocked and I thought it was unfair because if he's cutting our wages he should have told us one month before. I decided to quit my job. I really like my job and I work really hard and I am very satisfied with everything even though they sometimes don't pay me on time. I was so happy because our long holiday starts tomorrow. BUT now I .am,,,,not...at all. I will try to stay calm and have a great time though.
what an unexpectedsad day
I am (Present tense) so sad that I think my tears would be flown (past tense). But I grew (past t.) up as much I can (present t.) handle this much pain.
My boss said He would be cut 30 % wages of all employees. I was so shocked and I thought it is _unfair _ that he should cut wages. He should have told us one mothe (month) before. I decided to leave my work . I really like my job and work really hard and I am very satisfied with everything, even though the pay is sometimes delayed. I must have been so happy because of starting long holidays from tomorrow. BUT now I .am,,,,not...at all. I will try to mind control and have a great time though.
What an unexpectedly sad day!
I am so sad that I think I might/will cry! But I am grown up and can handle this pain. My boss said he would (is going to) cut all employees wages by 30%! ..... or ... I (have) decided to quit my job. ..... I was so happy because I was due to start a long holiday from tomorrow. I will try and stay calm and have a great time anyway.
Well done, its quite demanding using so many tenses and descriptive words. eg. "tears flowed like wine/ a river" its a poetic idea and a little complex to express. flown refers to flight: flew (p.t.), 'has flown the nest'.
The tenses are a bit mixed at the beginning, then a clear piece of writing.
