Denise
Weird Wednesday So today was an odd day, or maybe it has been an odd week. These last days, I've been having this feeling of unease. I'm not quite sure how to describe it. Just feels like somehow something is just wrong with life. I don't know, maybe it is just the weather. Cloudy days always make me feel strange and weird. Hopefully this cloudy/chilly season will end soon.
Oct 16, 2014 2:02 AM
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Weird Wednesday

So today was an odd day, or maybe it has been an odd week. These last days, I've been having this uneasy feeling. I'm not quite sure how to describe it. It Just feels like somehow something is just wrong with life. I don't know, maybe it is just the weather. Cloudy days always make me feel strange and weird.
Hopefully this cloudy/chilly season will end soon.

 

(I removed the second "just" because you had already used it previously in the sentence.)

 

GREAT job! You write very well. 

October 25, 2014
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