a relation between technology and cuture

Technology has been an important role in developing a country. Some people believe that introducing new technology will reduce the value of life such as lifestyle or culture, that the existence of both is not possible . This argument has advantages and also drawbacks
There are two benifits associated with technology which are developed strongly. Firstly, technology can replace humans to do work more effectively. For example, these days computer systems have become more common. They help us manage human resources efficiently and allow us to upgrade the quality of products. Moreover, in special cases such as emergencies or rescue, robots can save human life without requiring support from others. Secondly, with technology present there have been new innovations in society. For example, traffic systems have been renovated and a lot of unique constructions have been built. All of these have changed the structure of the city.
There are down sides to removing a traditional lifestyle and changing the culture. Traditional lifestyle is a main differentiating feature between other coutries. In addition culture expresses the ways to live and good things were recorded by ancients. Removing tradition and culture is impossible, if they are lost, who are we as people? For instance, when you have a cobflict with someone, apologizibg is actually a choice, but now people can use technology to represent their apology. As a result, humans will probably lose emotional connection with one another. 
In coclusion, technology will become a main part of developing coutries. They can do many things though  some things are limited to humans . People should not depend on them too much. They should find a way to combine tradition and culture with new technology.

your writing is very good. I don't know if you will see my correction, but I just changed little things to make it sound more natural.