Homework Tufan, Bilge 17.10.2014 Portfolio 3 Draft 1st I graduated from high school and I am a p

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Homework Tufan, Bilge 17.10.2014 Portfolio 3 Draft 1st I graduated from high school and I am a preparatory student now. Firstly I don’t think the preparatory school is different from high school. However, I was more stressful last year. I would take an exam to go to university. Even so I had very good time with my friends all over the year. I studied many lessons last year. At the preparatory school, I’m studying only English and it is a little bit strange for me. So there are some differences between last year and this year of course. A new city, extracurricular activities, and friendship are only some of these differences. I lived in Anamur until moving to İzmir for high school. Anamur is a small town. So I felt excited when I went to İzmir first time. It is a big city but it isn’t complex. When I came to İstanbul for university, I wasn’t excited as in İzmir. İstanbul is bigger than İzmir and it is more complex. However I used to live in İstanbul by and by. There are a lot of clubs for students at university. I belong to two clubs. One of them is dance club. I danced when I was at high school but I have more time at university. The other club that I belong is BÜYAK. It is a club for career. Friendship is one of the most important things for me. I had a lot of friends at high school. Most of them went to different cities. I miss them so much. Firstly I was concerned about new friends but I met a lot of good people. I think I will gain good friendships.

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Homework

Tufan, Bilge 17.10.2014

Portfolio 3

Draft 1st

I have [bence, böyle daha iyi] graduated from high school and I am a preparatory student now. Firstly, [ 'Firstly/First of all' yazarsanız, listeyi beklemiyorum: Secondly... Thirdly....Finally, ama, burada, listeniz yok] I don’t think the preparatory school is different from high school. However, I was more stressed stressful last year. I would had to take an exam to go to university. Even so I had a very good time with my friends all over throughout the year. I studied many lessons last year. At the preparatory school, I’m studying only English and it is a little bit strange for me. So there are some differences between last year and this year of course. A new city, extracurricular activities, and friendship(s) are only some of these differences.
I lived in Anamur until moving to İzmir for high school. Anamur is a small town. So I felt excited when I went to İzmir (for) the first time. It is a big city but it isn’t complex. When I came to Istanbul for university, I wasn’t (as) excited as in İzmir.
İstanbul is bigger than İzmir and it is more complex. However I used to live in Istanbul by and by. [Belki: However, I have stayed in Istanbul now and then]
There are a lot of clubs for students at university. I belong to two clubs. One of them is a dance club. I danced when I was at high school but I have more time at university. The other club that I belong to is BÜYAK. It is a career club for career.
Friendship is one of the most important things for me. I had a lot of friends at high school. Most of them went to different cities. I miss them so much. Firstly I was concerned about (making) new friends but I have met a lot of good people. I think I will gain /make/start/ some good friendships.