Melissa
The fragility of life Each seemingly powerful life ,in the face of illness.Like ants,fragile cannot withstand a single blow. in my memory,it was the first time I saw close relative lying on a single hospital bed stand for a moment to sit and repeatly without sleep.The doctor also is helpless.Crying is useless. We can only pray to Gods mercy,to ease the pain of the patient.
Oct 20, 2014 3:16 AM
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The fragility of life


Each seemingly powerful human life <em>[clearer emphasis]</em>, seemingly powerful <em>[stylistically better for your sentence to move here on its own, demarcated with commas]</em>, yet in the face of illness. L like an ant ants, is fragile and cannot withstand a single blow.

 

in my memory From what I can remember <em>[stylistically better]</em>, it was the first time I saw when I first saw <em>[stylistically better]</em> a close relative lying on a single hospital bed stand for a moment to sit and repeatly without sleep <em>[I don't understand what is happening here]</em>.The doctor also is helpless.This is the pancreatic cancer patient. Crying is useless. We can only pray to for God's mercy <em>[accepted expressions are "pray to God", "pray for mercy"]</em> to ease the pain of the patient.

October 25, 2014

The fragility of life

Each seemingly powerful life ,in the face of illness.Like ants,fragile cannot withstand a single blow. in my memory,it was the first time I saw close relative lying on a single hospital bed stand for a moment to sit and repeatly without sleep.The doctor also is helpless.This is the pancreatic cancer patient.Crying is useless. We can only pray to Gods mercy,to ease the pain of the patient.

October 20, 2014
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