Aimée
2014-10-20 After the whole day work, i come back to room. I don't like the life i live just like i don't like myself. will life changed after Wednesday? I don't know. But the only thing i can do is try my best to change my thought and the attitude of life. I should happy everyday, because people who love me wish this.
Oct 20, 2014 1:43 PM
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2014-10-20

After a whole day of work, I came back to my room. I don't like the life I am living because I don't like myself. Will life change after Wednesday? I don't know. But the only thing I can do is to try my best to change my thoughts and attitude towards life. I should be happy everyday, because the people who loves me wishes this.

 

Sounds like a rough day... 加油!

October 20, 2014

2014-10-20

After a long day at work, I came back to my room. I don't like the life I live just like i don't like myself. Will life change after Wednesday?I don't know. The only thing i can do is try my best to change my thoughts and my attitude towards life. I should be happy every day, because the people who love me wish this for me.

 

(The other two corrections contain a few mistakes, so I thought it best to correct it myself. I hope you feel better soon!)

November 5, 2014
Stay strong. Things will get better.
October 23, 2014

2014-10-20

After the whole day a long day at work, I came back to room. I don't like the life that I live just like I don't like myself. Will my life changed after Wednesday? I don't know. But the only thing I can do is try my best to change my thoughts and the attitude of towards life. I should be happy everyday, because the people who love me wish this for me. (or: the people who love me wish the best for me)

October 20, 2014
You smile to life, life will also smile for you.
October 20, 2014
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