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Traditional Chinese Wedding China is differend from the wedding on the West,the whole wedding's main colors are red,which is representative of traditional Chinese festive colors. zhong shi hun li yu xi shi hun li bu tong,zheng ge hun li de zu se shi hong se,hong se shi zhong guo chuan tong jie ri de dai biao se.中式婚礼与西式婚礼不同,整个婚礼的主色是红色,红色是中国传统节日的代表色。 I will write a short article that including Chinese traditional culture,everyday.I think it's a good way for us to stady each other.I can improve my English,you can know more about China.
Oct 21, 2014 3:16 AM
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Traditional Chinese Wedding

China is differend from the wedding on the West,the whole wedding's main colors are red,which is representative of traditional Chinese festive colors.

zhong shi hun li yu xi shi hun li bu tong,zheng ge hun li de zu se shi hong se,hong se shi zhong guo chuan tong jie ri de dai biao se.中式婚礼与西式婚礼不同,整个婚礼的主色是红色,红色是中国传统节日的代表色。

I will write a short article that including Chinese traditional culture,everyday.I think it's a good way for us to stady each other.I can improve my English,you can know more about China.

 

Chinese weddings (中式婚礼) are different from weddings in the west.

我们在说一个一般情况的时候,就用复数形式,即weddings。然后因为主语是复数,动词要改成are。还有,是in the west,而不是on the west。

 

The wedding's main colour is red, which is typical of traditional Chinese festive colours.

你只说了一种颜色,就是红色,所以要说the wedding's main colour(单数形式),而不是colours(复数形式)。然后,后半句不逻辑,你写的which is representative of traditional Chinese festive colors是“红色代表中国传统婚礼的颜色”的意思,就是一种颜色代表一种颜色。我该成”红色是中国传统婚礼的典型颜色”。

October 21, 2014
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