please correct these lines. i`m working as a sales&service executive person in NEO medy systems at Hyderabad from yesterday onwards.i`m feeling comfortable here.i`m learning about sales at present and

Laxmi

please correct these lines. i`m working as a sales&service executive person in NEO medy systems at Hyderabad from yesterday onwards.i`m feeling comfortable here.i`m learning about sales at present and further i will learn about service.They will send me to Chennai for learning service.i`m eagerly waiting for this.Thank you.

Oct 21, 2014 6:09 AM

Corrections · 1

Please correct these lines.

I have been working as a sales and service executive person in NEO Medy Systems at Hyderabad since yesterday. I'm feeling comfortable here. I'm learning about sales right now and later on I will learn about service. They will send me to Chennai for learning service. I'm eagerly waiting for this. Thank you.

Quick thing: Why is this in the Telugu section? I believe this should have been in the English section. Also some comments: "I'm" is written with an apostrophe like that, not whatever you were using before. Make sure to capitalize letters. Otherwise, very good :)

November 7, 2014

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