My home. Would someone correct this for me? Thanks MY HOME . Hi my name is Tonia, I live in a old flat, in the center of my town, but it is completely renovated. My flat has high ceilings and thic

Tonia

My home. Would someone correct this for me? Thanks MY HOME . Hi my name is Tonia, I live in a old flat, in the center of my town, but it is completely renovated. My flat has high ceilings and thick walls. I bouth it a military, althougt is very cosy. It has trhee rooms , It has a living room, a bathroom and a large kitchen, and it also has a balcony . I painted it the color makeup and the rooms have a color and brown earth . It's gorgeous flat!. I love it, even though sometimes I think too big for me, so one day I decided to rent a room and so far it's going very well.

Oct 21, 2014 7:14 AM

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My home. Would someone correct this for me? Thanks

MY HOME .

Hi my name is Tonia, I live in a old flat, in the center of my town, but it is completely renovated.
My flat has high ceilings and thick walls. I bought it from the military, althougth it is very cosy. It has three bedrooms , It has a living room, a bathroom and a large kitchen, and it also has a balcony .

I painted it the colour that I like best which is brown earth .

It's a gorgeous flat!. I love it, even though sometimes I think it is too big for me, so one day I decided to rent out a room and so far it's going very well.

Red = Corrections. Blue = Suggestions.

''I decided to rent out a room'' = Somebody rents the room from you.

''I decided to rent a room'' = You rent a room. =Eres la inquilina.

October 21, 2014

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