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Hope a Foreigner Come to My House I ever have a foreigner friend in my house last years. This boy very help me to study English and tell me about anythings useful. He tell me about good life style, hard work and passion. I really hope there's some foreigner come to my house again this years. when you visit my country please visit me. you can stay for a few days. :-D.
Oct 21, 2014 8:25 AM
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Hope a Foreigner Comes to My House

 

Last year, I ever have had a foreigner friend visiting in my house. last years. That boy (or...He helped me...)very helped me very much to study English and tell told me about anythings many useful things. He tell told me about good life style, hard work and passion.

I really hope there's some foreigner comes to my house again this year. years. (Or ..I really hope there's some foreigner visiting my house again this year.) When you visit my country, please visit me. You can stay in my house for a few days.


:-D.

 

As you are describing a past event, you should use past tense (e.g. 'told' in place of 'tell.')

October 26, 2014
Bien. could you tell me that Couchsuffing website? I really want to join that groups. I hope I can help them.
October 21, 2014
wooow..., awesome. hahaha. yes you're right, you have a better English than me. I always bad in grammar. Indeed writing skill. I should learn more. I hope I can study from you Bien. thanks for your comments. I need your corrections again on my next post. hahaha.
October 21, 2014
It will be easy if you join Couchsuffing website. This website gathers travellers from all over the world. You can host many travellers from many countries. They will ask you for some days stay in your house during time their time in ur country. They will happy to know that you are ready to help them
October 21, 2014
I think I can write better than you :) in this essay. u didnt use past tense. If I was you I would write like this : There was a foreigner friend who stayed in my house last year. That boy helped me to study English and told me many useful things. He told me about good life styles,hard works and passion. I really hope some foreigner friends will come to my house again this year........"
October 21, 2014
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