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The lonely abroad life I've been staying in Ireland for 3 month Today, I've strong headache If I staying in Korea, I will be helped by parents or friends but I'm alone here I have friends, but all of them are just light relationship I couldn't call anybody I ate medicine and endured myself I will effort make friends whose close each other I feeling lonely tonight
Oct 21, 2014 8:36 PM
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The lonely abroad life

I've been living in Ireland for 3 month now/so far
Today, I have a strong headache <-- sounds more natural that way
If I were still (living) in Korea, I would have my parents or friends to help me
but I'm alone here
I have friends, but we're not close 
I can't call anybody <-- "couldn't" is past tense, "can't" is present continuous
I took medicine and endured myself <-- in English we say 'take medicine' not 'eat medicine' 
I will make an effort to make close friends 
I'm feeling lonely tonight/I feel lonely tonight



Aww, I'm sorry you don't have any close friends. I hope you make some close friends soon and find peace. You can always chat with me whenever you want ^^

Take care!

October 21, 2014
Thank you Sally !
October 21, 2014
Don't worry you will make close friends, keep trying! You should still communicate with your friends and family back home too. When I lived abroad it was important for me to skype or call or email my friends and family.
October 21, 2014
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