Juan
My first day here Hi everybody. Today was my first day as a member of this community. I have registered here because I want to improve my English and share differents experiences and cultures with people from different places. In the afternoon I was searching people to do a language exchange and finally I was talking trough a videocall with a person from Ireland. It was a great experience because I usually have not had the opportunity to talk in English with a native speaker for more than a minute. Also, I discovered that in this site you can do and ask questions for instance related to the meaning of a word or to grammatical issues and even there are interesting articles such as one that explains how to write a work email properly. For now, I will be focused in my English mainly due to work/studies reasons, but probably in the future, once my English become fluency, I will think about learn one more idiom, maybe German or French. If some of you are interested in language exchange with a native Spanish speaker who is learning English please contact me. That was all for today. Regards.
Oct 21, 2014 11:15 PM
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My first day here

Hi everybody.

Today is my first day as a member of this community. (Yesterday was my first day .....)

I have registered here because I want to improve my English and share different  experiences and cultures with people from different places.

In the afternoon I was searching for people to do a language exchange with and finally I talked through a videocall with a person from Ireland. It was a great experience because I usually have not had the opportunity to talk in English with a native speaker for more than a minute.

Also, I discovered that in this site you can do and ask questions for instance related to the meaning of a word or to grammatical issues and even there are even interesting articles such as one that explains how to write a work email properly.

For now, I will be focus on *my English mainly due to work/studies reasons, but probably in the future, once my English becomes more fluent, I will think about learning another language, maybe German or French.

If some of you are interested in language exchange with a native Spanish speaker who is learning English please contact me.

That was all for today.

Regards.

 

Red = corrections. Blue = suggestions.

* Focus on something.

 

Very good you have only a few minor mistakes.

October 23, 2014

My first day here

Hi everybody.

Today was my first day as a member of this community.

I have registered here because I want to improve my English and share different experiences and cultures with people from different places.   [ not differents -- in English the adjective does not change when it modifies a plural construction ]

In the afternoon I was searching people to do a language exchange and finally I was talking trough a videocall with a person from Ireland. It was a great experience because I usually have not had the opportunity to talk in English with a native speaker for more than a minute.

Also, I discovered that in this site you can do and ask questions, for instance related to the meaning of a word or to grammatical issues, and even there are even interesting articles such as one that explains how to write a work email properly.

For now, I will be focused in my English mainly due to work/studies reasons, but probably in the future, once my English becomes more fluent fluency, I will think about learning one more idiom language, maybe German or French.  [idioma = language in English]

If some of you are interested in language exchange with a native Spanish speaker who is learning English, please contact me.

That was all for today.

Regards.

 

Your English is quite good.  I made a few minor changes.  

October 21, 2014
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