Pablo
My new work i have a work for my department of "English 5" in Inacap Santiago of chile. this is requeriments "Write an e-mail to the representative of Google because of an offer you read where they need someone for a job position. * Say hello and write about the reason of your e-mail * Introduce yourself * Say where you are from * Talk about what job position you are interested in. * Tell him/her the reasons why you are the correct person for that position (Talk about your experience and degree) * Say the department where you would like to work * What type of job you would like (Full-time, part-time) * Tell him/her about your skills. * Say good-bye * Complete with your information. Include the linking words: * Expressing result: THEREFORE * Express Condition: UNLESS " My answer "Dear Mr. Google. I am writing to introduce me for a job position publicized in the newspaper. I live in Santiago, Chile I have old 27 years. currently, I study in the school In. Telecommunications connectivity and networking. The job position that I interested is “Administrator of network”. The skills that I have for this position as problem-solving skills, Management skills, negotiating skills also i have language skill. My experience in the area is: Nextel Telecommunications as section boss. four years of experience. Entel Telecommunications as manager of negotiating. two years of experience. I have also experience in private work, as installing of systems of video-conferencing and alarms of security. My availability is full time. please do not hesitate to email, or call me Personal info: My Cell phone: 777777777 My e-mail : [email protected] My best regards"
Oct 22, 2014 1:01 AM
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My new work

i have a work for my department of "English 5" in Inacap Santiago of chile. (I think you mean to say: I have an assignment for my class "English 5")
these are the requirements.


"Write an e-mail to the representative of Google because of an offer you read where they need someone for a job position.
* Say hello and write about the reason of your e-mail
* Introduce yourself
* Say where you are from
* Talk about what job position you are interested in.
* Tell him/her the reasons why you are the correct person for that position (Talk about your experience and degree)
* Say the department where you would like to work
* What type of job you would like (Full-time, part-time)
* Tell him/her about your skills.
* Say good-bye
* Complete with your information.
Include the linking words:
* Expressing result: THEREFORE
* Express Condition: UNLESS "

My answer

"Dear Mr. Google.
I am writing to introduce myself for a job position publicized in the newspaper.
I live in Santiago, Chile I am 27 years old. currently, I study in the school In. Telecommunications connectivity and networking.
The job position that I am interested in is “Administrator of network”. The skills that I have for this position are problem-solving skills, Management skills, negotiating skills  Also i have language skills.
My experience in the area is:
Nextel Telecommunications as section boss. four years of experience.
Entel Telecommunications as manager of negotiating. two years of experience.

I also have experience in private work, as installing video-conferencing systems and security alarms.

My availability is full time.

please do not hesitate to email, or call me

Personal info:
My Cell phone: 777777777
My e-mail : [email protected]

My best regards"

 

Very good Pablo.

October 23, 2014
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