Stephanny
Why I want to improve my English I am an easy going person and friendly, but I´m not good when I need to talk with someone and less with another language, my goal is to improve my English and apply in a call center and maybe I can overcome my shyness and the same time I improve my English. I´m honest, sometimes I frustrated because learn a different language isn´t easy, you need to be persistent and never give up, I think why I want to learn English? I want to make friends for all the world and I have a couple friends and I want to be able to speak English with them, I want to find a good job because I know if you speak English or French, etc etc, but you can be sure you will get a good job. In my country there are too many call centers in English and I always think why I apply for a call center in English, we have a call center in Spanish is more easy and I don´t need to speak another language, but a couple years I think, I want to travel and make friends and someday live in another country, but I need to practice English and if a I want to find a job I need to know English, so I search on the internet and found at many websites courses in English and you can find friends to The United States, Canada, Pakistan, Turky etc etc. I have 3 friends from The United States and 1 in Pakistan, and they only speak English so I have more motivation to speak English well.
Oct 22, 2014 9:16 PM
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Why I want to improve my English

I am an easy going person and friendly, but I´m not good when I need to talk with someone, even less when I speak in another language. My goal is to improve my English and apply in a call center. Then maybe I can overcome my shyness and at the same time improve my English. To be honest, sometimes I become frustrated because learning a different language isn´t easy, you need to be persistent and never give up. I think "why do I want to learn English?" I want to make friends for all the world*. I have a couple friends and I want to be able to speak English with them, I want to find a good job because I know if you speak English or French, etc etc, then you can be sure you will get a good job. In my country there are too many call centers in English and I always think why I apply for a call center in English, we have a call center in Spanish is more easy and I don´t need to speak another language **, but a couple years I think. I want to travel and make friends and someday live in another country, but I need to practice English first if a I want to find a job I need to know English, so I searched on the internet and found at many website courses in English where you can find friends in The United States, Canada, Pakistan, Turkey etc etc. I have 3 friends from The United States and 1 in Pakistan, and they only speak English so I have more motivation to speak English well.

 

* Aquí puede usar "all around the world" or "throughout the world". En este contexto "for" es como usar "para" en lugar de " por"

** If we had a call center in Spanish, it would be easier and I would not need to speak another language

 

Muy bien hecho Stephanny. Solo hubo problemas pequeños con la gramatica. Recuerda que el gerundio es más comun en ingles (tengo el problema contrario con español). Recomiendo que estudie pronombres y preposiciones para avanzar.

 

October 22, 2014
You have put much time into writing your entry. Your English is pretty good. If you continue trying, you will reach your goal to work in any call center, or jobs which require more of you.
October 22, 2014
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