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A Homecoming Dance In October 11th I went to a school's dance of homecoming. It was extremely fun, much of dancing, and funny people there. There was good music i was surprised. In the dance was many people. I wish i can be another night in that moment i enjoyed. It were a magical experience. Hope to visit dances again another time. I will show what i wore. sorry if english were bad in this.
Oct 23, 2014 2:43 AM
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A Homecoming Dance

In October 11th I went to a school's dance of homecoming. It was extremely fun, much of dancing, and funny people there. There was good music i was surprised. In the dance was many people. I wish i can be another night in that moment i enjoyed. It were a magical experience. Hope to visit dances again another time.
I will show what i wore. sorry if english were bad in this.

On October 11th, I attended a school's homecoming dance.  It was a lot of fun, with dancing and funny people.  I was surprised that there was such good music.  Many people attended the dance, and I wish I could relive that night which I enjoyed so much.  It was a magical experience.  I hope to attend more dances like that one.

October 25, 2014
Yes, I agree with Chris. But she herself declared that she is from Thailand. Moreover, Asiaa can speak several Asian languages.
October 25, 2014
You look a bit like Rihanna.haha
October 23, 2014
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