Nick
About me Hello, my name is Nick. I am 10 years old. I am from Russia. About food. I prefer meat, especially fried pork. I like almost fruits. I don't like fig, watermelon and mango. About vegetables. I don't like pumpkin, eggplant, vegetable marrow, etc. About sports. I'm interested in volleyball and football. I like to play these games. I don't like discus, throwing axe. I don't like cross country skiing, but prefer downhill skis. About games. I don't like sudoku and puzzle, but not all of them. Thank you for your attention, see you later!!!
Oct 23, 2014 8:29 AM
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About Me

Hello, my name is Nick. I am 10 years old. I am from Russia.
About food. I prefer meat, especially fried pork. I like almost fruits. I don't like figs, watermelon. or mango.
About vegetables. I don't like pumpkin, eggplant, vegetable marrow, etc.
About sports. I'm interested in volleyball and football. I like to play these sports. I don't like discus, or axe throwing.  I don't like cross-country skiing, but prefer downhill skiing.
About games. I don't like sudoku or puzzles, but not all of them. [1]
Thank you for your attention.  See you later!!!

 

[1]  The phrase "but not all of them" is a little hard to understand.  Does "them" refer to "games", or only to sudoku and puzzles?

 

You wrote your post very well!

October 24, 2014
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