My job as a teacher.
Please. Could someone correct this writing?
When I was studying at university I was not sure if my future job would be appropriate for me, but when I started to working as a teacher, I realized that I would be happy teaching children because I loved it.
I have worked at a school for more than fifteen years and I still love my job.
Regarding my work, I start working at nine o´clock every day and finish at two, but on Monday afternoon I have to work too. I teach maths to several groups of students who are between ages 10 and 12. I don’t generally use the official books because I prefer to do my lessons according to my students' rate of learning, so I have to prepare them at home. In addition I have a blog where my students can find a lots of activities to learn and parents can read about how their children are doing in class. I also teach art. We usually draw and paint and my students say that this is the nicest subject they have.
With respect to my students, on the one hand I will say that they are very good children and I love them. I think that they give me more than I give them. On the other hand it is a little difficult to educate them sometimes. Some children don’t like studying and their parents don’t help them enough because they are working all day and the children stay with their grandparents, so they don’t do their homework. On occasion some children are a little difficult to deal with because they have family problems and their behavior is moody so as the teacher, I have to try to lead them.
In my opinion, education will eventually show change in my country. I think it will be better in the future but, unfortunately, I am afraid I won’t see it's because it will probably take a long time.
In my opinion, children should stay one or two more years in primary school because they are much too young to go to secondary school. Also in secondary school, children have too much subjects so they don't learn enough Language or Mathematics, and consequently many of them fail.
Sadly I can't change these things so I am only trying to improve my work every day
My job as a teacher.
Please. Could someone correct this writing?
When I was studying at a university I was not sure if my future job would be appropriate for me, but when I started to work as a teacher, I realized that I would be happy teaching children because I loved it.
I have worked at a school for more than fifteen years and I still love my job.
Regarding my work, I start working at nine o´clock every day and finish at two, but on Monday afternoon I have to work too. I teach math to several groups of students who are between ages 10 and 12. I don’t generally use the official books because I prefer to do my lessons according my students, so I have to prepare them at home. In addition I have a blog where my students can find a lot of activities to learn and parents can read about how their children do in class. I also teach art. We usually draw and paint and my students say that this is the nicest subject they have.
With respect to my students, on the one hand I will say that they are very good children and I love them. I think that they give me more than I give them. On the other hand it is a little difficult to educate them sometimes. Some children don’t like studying and their parents don’t help them enough because they are working all day and the children stay with their grandparents, so they don’t do their homework. On occasion some children are a little difficult to deal with because they have family problems and their behavior is moody so a teacher has to try to lead them.
In my opinion, education shall show change in my country. I think it will be better in the future but, unfortunately, I am afraid I won’t see it because it will probably take a long time.
In my opinion, children should stay one or two more years in primary school because they are too much young to go to scondary school . Also in secondary school,children have too many subjects so they don't learn as much language or mathematics, so consequently many of them fail.
Sadly I can't change these things so I am only trying to improve my work every day
Great job! Just remember that subjects in school are usually lowercase. Sometimes specific types of subjects have a capital letter. For example 'math' would be lowercase, but 'Algebra' (a type of math) would have a capital A.
