Matt
Two famous singers in my country. Wu Mochou made a splash two years ago in a singing contest called The voice of China. Although she didn’t win the contest at the end, she still got a bunch of fans during and after the contest. It’s apparent that what contributes to her success is not only her unique wired but her bizarre dress. Controversy about her singing style has never stopped. The second singer I want to talk about is Wang Fei. Unlike Wu Mochou, Wang Fei has nothing special in appearance, but she got incredible voice. When you listen to her songs, it feels like you are walking in a rural town, the breezing blows your face and you can smell the fragrance of tulip around you. You would totally immerse in her voice. That’s why she is arguably one of the most popular singers in China.
Oct 25, 2014 2:42 AM
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Two famous singers in my country.

Wu Mochou made a splash two years ago in a singing contest called 'The Voice Of China'.  Although she didn’t win the contest at the end, she still had a lot of fans during and after the contest. It’s apparent that what contributes to her success is not only her unique wired (I don't understand this word) but her bizarre dress. Controversy about her singing style has never stopped.
The second singer I want to talk about is Wang Fei. Unlike Wu Mochou, Wang Fei has nothing special in appearance, but she has an incredible voice. When you listen to her songs, it feels like you are walking in a rural town, with the breeze blowing in your face and you can smell the fragrance of tulips around you. You would totally immerse yourself in her voice. That’s why she is arguably one of the most popular singers in China.

This is very well written, just a few small errors in grammar.  Spelling is perfect!  Congratulations.

What is the meaning of 'wired' in your sentence?

October 25, 2014
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