Sakanacha
Arms of English Speaking of studying English, I sometimes want to use a metaphor crawling along. If we go ahead on crawling along,we should move both arms by turns. In case we move forward only a arm,you don't advance well or get too much tired. As for studying English,the way that we lesson only reading is inefficiently so we should deal with several trainings such as reading,grammar,listening,writing,its conversation... Come to think of it,the arms of English are too much:studying English is far from crawling along in terms of an amount which we must do. Though perhaps you will say ''that is a matter of course,why now?'',I want to praise your arms of English as too much well-muscled already!
Oct 26, 2014 12:23 AM
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Arms of English

When referring to the study of English, I sometimes want to use a metaphor crawling along.
If we go ahead on crawling along,we should remember to use both arms by turns.
In case If we move forward with only one arm,you don't advance well or get too much tired.
As for studying English,the way that we lesson  learn only by reading is inefficiently so we should use several trainings such as reading,grammar,listening,writing, and conversation...
Come to think of it,the arms of English are too much:studying English is far more difficult from crawling along in terms of an amount which we must do.
Though perhaps you will say ''that is a matter of opinion'',I want to praise you as your arms of English are well-muscled already!

 

- Great use of "too" instead of "to" - you did that perfectly! When using "too" you do not have to add "much". 

- When listing off items in a sentence (reading, grammar, listening, writing) use "and" before the last item you are listing.

October 26, 2014
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