A boy who is struggling for his education First of all, thank you for giving me a chance to tell my story. Today, I would like to tell you about my story. The first story is about my starting life an

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A boy who is struggling for his education First of all, thank you for giving me a chance to tell my story. Today, I would like to tell you about my story. The first story is about my starting life and my family. I was born in 1991. I have three brothers and four sisters. Among them, I’m the youngest. When I was 4 or 5 years old I was fat not like this. Everybody loved me as I was so cute. I couldn’t remember what had happened every single day when I was a kid. However, I was a little bit rascals. I have never shamed to sing song in front of the people. And when my primary school life my hand-writing was so bad. The teacher told me that your hand-writing is so bad how I can read such a so bad hand-writing. However, I was selected as a outstanding student in science and English. I was so happy even though my hand-writing was so bad. However, I failed that competition because of my hand-writing. From that day on, I practiced in order to get good hand-writing every single day. At first, it was so difficult to get good hand-writing in Myanmar Language. After one year, my hand-writing was completely difference. My hand-writing was surprised by the teacher. The teacher said that it looks like a circle in Myanmar Language. When I was in high school, I was selected to compete in poem, article written in Myanmar Language. I won the prize every year until the high school student life was finished. During my high school life, I started interested in playing the violin. It was 12 or 13 years old. I used to play the violin in church every Sunday. It was fun. I also used to play the football when I was young. Now, the second story is about my university life. My university life was started about 16 years old. As far as I’m concerned, my father told me that I’m the only person who has a chance to go to the University in our family and generation. That’s why, I have the responsibility to raise up not only my next generation but also for Kachin people as much as I can. To tell you the truth, I wanted to be a doctor when I was young. But I wasn’t. However, I decided to do my best where I am. As I said, I did it. Let me give you example; Actually, I don’t want to blow my own trumpet but I have to tell you the truth. My first years of University life, I won the third prize in my major. There were over 600 students in my major. Similarly, I won the second prize in second year. Therefore, I was selected to attend the Honors class in order to get master degree. There were only 12 students in Honors class. Continue

Oct 27, 2014 2:10 AM

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First of all, thank you for giving me a chance to tell my story. Today, I would like to tell you about my story.
The first story is about the start of my life and my family. I was born in 1991. I have three brothers and four sisters. Among them, I’m the youngest. When I was 4 or 5 years old I was fat, not like I am now [what did you mean by 'this'?]. Everybody loved me as I was so cute. I couldn’t remember what had happened every single day when I was a kid. However, I was a little bit of a rascal. I was never ashamed to sing in front of people. And when I was in primary school my hand-writing was so bad. The teacher told me "your hand-writing is so bad, how I can read such bad hand-writing." However, I was selected as a outstanding student in science and English. I was so happy even though my hand-writing was so bad. However, I failed that competition because of my hand-writing. From that day on, I practiced every single day in order to get good hand-writing. At first, it was so difficult to get good hand-writing in Myanmar Language. After one year, my hand-writing was completely different. My hand-writing surprised the teacher. The teacher said that it looks like a circle in Myanmar Language.
When I was in high school, I was selected to compete in a poem article written in Myanmar Language. I won the prize every year until my high school student life was finished. During my high school life, I became interested in playing the violin. I was 12 or 13 years old. I used to play the violin in church every Sunday. It was fun. I also used to play football when I was young.
Now, the second story is about my university life. My university life was started when I was about 16 years old. As far as I’m concerned, my father told me that I’m the only person who has a chance to go to the University in our family and generation. That’s why, I have the responsibility to raise up not only my next generation but also for Kachin people as much as I can. To tell you the truth, I wanted to be a doctor when I was young. But I didn't. However, I decided to do my best where I am. As I said, I did it. Let me give you example - actually, I don’t want to blow my own trumpet but I have to tell you the truth. My first years of University life, I won the third prize in my major. There were over 600 students in my major. Similarly, I won the second prize in second year. Therefore, I was selected to attend the Honors class in order to get master degree. There were only 12 students in Honors class. Continue.

October 29, 2014

You're absolutely right! To tell you the truth, I just wrote an article for pleasure. It's not my story. I talked one of my older friend a couple of weeks ago. He told me his story. And then, I just wrote his story in English. However, I asked for permission to write his story. Because he is really remarkable person. That's why, I love this story and post it. That's all.

November 1, 2014